Talk:Steve Moore

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Contents 1 Bias 2 Bias/Factual Inaccuracy. 3 Naslund hit 4 POV tag 5 Teacher?

[edit] Bias

OK...so much bias here. Can someone plz fix this seeing as how I'm a Vancouverite and my opinions will go into the article.Canuckman 07:16, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

This is a difficult article to edit. I've watched the game and Moore slashed at Bertuzzi several times but refused to fight. This article lacks sources/references that are neutral. -- Discordanian 02:51, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

"Though unclear, it is likely Bertuzzi then grappled Moore to begin fighting, and not realizing Moore was unconcious, toppled over him at which point Moore's head made contact with the ice, likely causing the extent of his injuries. Alternatively, it is speculated that Bertuzzi purposely drove Moore's head into the ice, although there is no evidence for this as we cannot read Bertuzzi's mind. Avalanche players then dogpiled the two, no doubt causing further injury."

let's get this straight, Bertuzzi likely didn't realize that Moore was unconcious [sic], but we can't read Bertuzzi's mind...which is it? and is there really no doubt that the dogpile caused further injuries. Whoever wrote that quoted bit did an awful job. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.189.243.79 (talk) 20:11, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Bias/Factual Inaccuracy.

"The incident likely came about as a result of a February 16 game between the two teams in Denver, in which Moore inflicted a clean hit on Vancouver Canucks captain Markus Näslund, causing him to miss the next three games with a concussion."

Steve Moore's hit was not clean; it was roundly criticized by sports outlets both Canadian and American.

Reading this article you'd almost think that Todd bertuzzi was the victim.

Jesus Christ, did Bertuzzi's lawyer write this? No sources. Nothing. Reads like a Vancouver fanboy's wet dream.

Completely biased to Steve Moores side. I personally dislike Bertuzzi after that hit, but this article sounds like a lawyers closing arguments in court, not an encyclopedia entry.

[edit] Naslund hit

I wonder if it should be mentioned that although Naslund missed only three games, he played injured for most of the next two months due to a broken elbow. -- Steven Fisher 17:43, 22 June 2006 (UTC)

I found some sources and so added it myself. -- Steven Fisher 17:49, 22 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] POV tag

Adding tag for reasons stated above. Also, he started playing hockey in 1998 and the first mention of his career is related to an incident with another player several years later. Needs rounding out with more background on him and less negative bias. Antonrojo 19:26, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

As of the draft with this timestamp, this problem has been fixed. Antonrojo 19:51, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Teacher?

On October 4, 2006, an anon added that Steve is now a high school teacher. Where is the source for this? Google doesn't give any results for "Steve Moore" + "Woodland High School", aside from this article and some mirrors. --Idont Havaname (Talk) 00:39, 3 January 2007 (UTC)