Talk:Starlight Starbright Children's Foundation

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The foundation is actually notable and does good work, but this article needs a total re-write. It reads like PR copy, and isn't encyclopedic at all in its current form. Whoever is working on it, please check the help pages on Wikipedia for instructions on what makes a good article. TheQuandry 15:07, 21 February 2007 (UTC)

I agree completetly Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! ^(Whisper...) 15:11, 21 February 2007 (UTC)

The article now includes more information about its services as well as the locations it serves.

[edit] What country?

I don't even know what country this thing operates in - rather basic! Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! ^(Whisper...) 07:35, 13 March 2007 (UTC)

The Foundation's headquarters are located in Los Angeles, Calif., with offices located throughout the United States as well as internationally. This information has been added to the foundation's article.

Good to see this added now - a rather basic piece of information that was missing! Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! ^(Whisper...) 05:37, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Foundation

Comments like "It has been in existence for more than two decades" are not helpful - if this article still says this in ten year's time it becomes meaningless - can we be more specific? Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! ^(Whisper...) 05:41, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

Founded as a small Australian charity in 1988. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.140.175 (talk) 12:59, 4 June 2008 (UTC)