Talk:St Pauls Tower

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[edit] Biased edit?

This St Pauls Tower article contains comments that I would regard as opinion and bordering on a sales pitch. Much of the text sounds as though it has been lifted from a press release or similar. The link to the sales brochure reinforces this impression. It needs to be written in a more neutral manner. stan matthews 15:08, 12 June 2007 (UTC)

Feel free to rewrite it! L.J.Skinner^{wot|I did} 01:31, 13 June 2007 (UTC)