Talk:SR Leader Class/Comments

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References/Citations need to be attributed to the text in general, flow of paragraphs could be improved, and secondary paragraphs brought in to break down the article into more manageable pieces, an example being a new section entitled 'Operational Details' in order to place the problems experienced by the fireman.--Bulleid Pacific 18:45, 13 April 2007 (UTC)