Talk:Sprung rhythm

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Does this page need a more clearly explained example of sprung rhythm? I know it well (Hopkins is an old favorite of mine) but I suspect that simply supplying a technical description and a poem may not be enough. Any thoughts? Jwrosenzweig 00:51, 18 Mar 2005 (UTC)

The article says 'feet in which the first syllable is stressed' - but this isn't the case with the poem it's talking about, unless I'm being very dense. Just in case I *am*, I haven't changed it, but if you're more confident than me, go sort it out? The Literary Encyclopaedia backs up the 'first syllable of the foot is stressed' point, although the Norton Anthology of English Literature doesn't mention it. It seems that the author is putting unstressed first syllables *outside* of feet - is this common practice?

Cheers --Oolong 09:11, 1 November 2005 (UTC)

The proposed scansion in the example only makes sense if you assume the first syllable is the stressed one; subsequent syllables are de-emphasized, relatively speaking. If I can use CAPS for syllabic emphasis, things might be a little clearer:

GLOry BE to GOD for DAPpled THINGS for SKIES of COUple-COLour as a BRINded COW

I don't understand what you mean by unemphasized syllables being outside of feet; a foot in sprung rhythm is made up of a stressed first syllable followed by an indeterminate number of unstressed syllables, which number can be zero. In that way the rhythm sort of sucks up all de-emphasized syllables as it goes. Does that make sense? Perhaps a truly exceptional poem can help: the first line of Hopkins's untitled kingfisher poem follows:

As kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame;

In this line, Hopkins breaks his own rule, because it's difficult to imagine he wants "As" to be an emphasized word (particularly if there are emphases on both "draw" and "flame", which is indicated in some editions). I remember a prof of mine comparing this exception to a pickup note at the beginning of a piece of music. So, to use the notation from the article itself (and assuming the emphasis on the two last words in the line is correct), you'd scan the line as follows:

As|kingfishers|catch fire,|dragonflies|draw|flame;

with the fifth foot remaining unclosed to catch the de-emphasized "As" which starts the second line.

If you think it's clearer, I can certainly change the formatting of the feet in the article to the CAPS style (as KINGfishers CATCH fire, DRAgonflies DRAW FLAME), or we can introduce bolds (As kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame;)...let me know what you're thinking.

Mark