Talk:Spirit of Eden

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Article requirements:
YesY All the start class criteria
YesY A completed infobox, including cover art and most technical details
YesY At least one section of prose (excluding the lead section)
YesY A track listing containing track lengths and authors for all songs
YesY A full list of personnel, including technical personnel and guest musicians
YesY Categorisation at least by artist and year
YesY A casual reader should learn something about the album. Andrzejbanas (talk) 08:16, 11 May 2008 (UTC)

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[edit] Colour of Spring

"Spirit of Eden's experimental nature was in contrast to the pop leanings of Talk Talk's previous releases, the most recent being their 1986 hit The Colour of Spring." - I had tought Colour of Spring was the break away from their pop sound. Ceoil 13:00, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

I've changed it. Punctured Bicycle 05:10, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
"While Talk Talk were not favourites amongst critics, the European commercial success of their first two albums provided enough money to incorporate acoustic instruments on 1986s The Colour of Spring." - This has been rephrased, but I don't get it. Normally an acoustic album signals "No Cash Here". Should it read orchestra. Ceoil 21:57, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
Acoustic just means any "real" instrument—piano, violin, harmonica, trumpet, etc. It's in contrast to synthesizer. Punctured Bicycle 23:04, 26 May 2007 (UTC)#
So why not just say that. Ceoil 23:10, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
Because it would be a long winded way of saying what acoustic already captures by itself. If the article referred to the album as an "acoustic album", I'd sympathize with your concern, but it doesn't say that. Punctured Bicycle 23:22, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
My reading so that money, effectively, should mean "Additional musicians". Ceoil 23:35, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
If c/e contributes are not welcome, you might however cut out some of the blue links. As a tip maybe assume your audience is aware of basic English. Ceoil 01:20, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
Copyedits that improve the text are welcome. Arbitrary edits that do nothing other than make the text conform to your own personal style aren't. I don't know which blue links you have a problem with, but "tour" has been delinked (although I don't think it was much of a problem). Punctured Bicycle 03:44, 27 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Talk Talk - I Believe In You video frame.jpg

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BetacommandBot (talk) 06:52, 21 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Talk Talk - Spirit of Eden cover.jpg

Image:Talk Talk - Spirit of Eden cover.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.

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BetacommandBot (talk) 06:53, 21 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Too much focus on negative reviews?

In the "critical reception" section, there is a short line saying it's been critically acclaimed, then a whole paragraph of negative criticism. Unfair? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.151.25.55 (talk) 00:27, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

It's because the negative criticism paragraph is easier to write, since there hasn't (to my knowledge) been much negative criticism directed towards the album. There is, by contrast, tons of positive criticism, and it will take work to combine it all into a few concise paragraphs. Wounder (talk) 20:19, 23 February 2008 (UTC)