Talk:Spartan Army/Comments

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[edit] Comments on Start assessment

  • Absolutely no sources cited anywhere in the article-Done Samrsharma 19:48, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
  • The article does not have a strong lead paragraph
  • The article needs extensive formatting work
  • The article has some issues with syntax and the flow of the text is not in a narrative style
  • Too many uses of "the foremost", "the most", etc.
  • Appears to be WP:OR-See 1 Samrsharma 19:48, 16 May 2007 (UTC)

Fixing these will go a long way to improving the article. You can request for help here. --Kimontalk 20:33, 10 May 2007 (UTC)