Talk:Sony Ericsson W910i

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It does read like an ad, but I think it is great that Wikipedia can have in depth information about specific products. Obviously the entire article needs to be restructured, everything needs to be moved and anything that doesn't have a place needs to be deleted. But whoever wrote this ad gave us a lot to work with. It is much easier to turn an ad like this into a real article than it is to be bothered to write an entire article from scratch. If anyone is interested (or knows of) a mobile handset project on Wikipedia, then we could probably do a lot of work. Also critical reception should be added sometime, from sources like cnet and such. JayKeaton (talk) 17:48, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Couldn't help myself, did a lot of work myself. I don't think it looks like an ad anymore, though it does (and did) have poor formating not in the Wikipedia standard. JayKeaton (talk) 18:30, 15 April 2008 (UTC)