Talk:Sohawa Tehsil

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baiwal is part of Sohawa is it not?

[edit] Issues with this stub

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  1. It contains grammatical errors;
  2. The phraseology is not of a standard consistent with how an entry should be written for inclusion in Wikipedia (and by extension, not entirely consistent with norms of contemporary, written speech evident in-vogue at the time of writing);
  3. There is evidence of bias on the part of the contributor(s), i.e. the first person is used, exposing the expression of opinions;
  4. No references are provided for the numerous assertions made throughout the article;
  5. The coverage of material concentrates heavily on specific aspects of the subject matter, while not making this immediately clear to the reader - consider use of headings;
  6. The formatting of text is not consistent, e.g. line and paragraph breaks;
  7. Consider the use of photographs or external links to make the page more informative.
  8. This stub is about Sohawa not Bishandaur. Bishandaurs has its own Prominance and should have a seperate thread. Do not concentrate on one family who does not even live in Sohawa.

Note:baiwal is in Tehsail GujarKhan Distt Rawalpindi