Talk:Skip Barber Racing School

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[edit] Neutral Point Of View

I just made a ton of changes and removals. Because the article was obviously written as an advertisement, as some of it was written in the first person, I removed all statements of grandeur. I understand that this school may indeed be the greatest and the biggest and the best, but these statements need citations and references. When an article reads like an advertisement, it makes it impossible to look at it without being on guard and on the lookout for lies, and is unencyclopedic. For now, I left the facts. If a sentence contained obvious bias, I removed it. Beltz 06:51, 13 May 2006 (UTC)