Talk:Sin City/Comments

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I rated the article at b class. I feel it's a long ways from being any rank higher for a few reasons.

• Needs more references
• Needs the "Chronology" section rewritten, it's very messy and has no references.
• The compilations should be reformatted as it makes it hard to read.
• The 2 bolded lists under characters, and settings are ugly and need to be rewritten with better text as well as reformatted (heavily).
• Some of the external links are not necessary and/or not important enough to be listed under that section. I am not adding this page to watch list, if you have anything to speak to me about concerning this please do so on my talk page, and link me here and I will check. businessman332211 18:04, 31 October 2007 (UTC)

I was logged out when I did this before, so I re-logged in and did it here again. businessman332211 18:04, 31 October 2007 (UTC)