Talk:Siddha Yoga

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Reviewed version: December 3, 2007

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To-do:
  1. Y Done Change history section from list format to paragraph format.
  2. Rewrite lead per suggestions from peer review and GA review.
  3. Create a section delineating the role of the guru in SY.
  4. Explain practices in greater detail. (from peer review)
    1. Expand on material about intensives with proper sourcing.
  5. Expand history section to include: (in progress)
    1. Early development in India
    2. Muktananda’s early visits to America and other western countries.
    3. Establishment of first ashrams in the west and their locations.
  6. Compare and contrast - how it relates to other topics.

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[edit] "Intensives"

Article says: "The main practices of Siddha Yoga include meditation, chanting, seva, dakshina, satsang and intensives."
I believe that I understand the meaning of "intensives", but I assume that there will be readers for whom this is not obvious. Therefore, could a definition or link for this please be provided in the article. (Not just mentioned here.) Thanks. -- 201.37.229.117 (talk) 23:54, 28 April 2008 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia, please feel free to add a definition (with a link as a source).TheRingess (talk) 02:21, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for your welcome. I am unable to provide a definition or cite, or I would have done so. Nevertheless, I believe that both should be included in the article. -- 201.37.229.117 (talk) 23:01, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
I'll add it to the to do list for this article.TheRingess (talk) 23:32, 29 April 2008 (UTC)