Talk:Shun Au

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[edit] Poor wording

I know that this isn't oft edited, but the following sentence is rather poorly worded:

He was a founding member of the following organizations, the Islington Chinese Association (external link) (1986), the Edinburgh Chinese Elderly Project (1988) and the Chinese Mental Health Association (external link) (1992) where he has remained Chairman ever since.

So, I'm going to try and recreate the same information in a way that is clearer. Kurrurrin 17:42, 6 April 2007 (UTC)