Talk:Show control
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I've tried to improve the clarity of this subject. I may be able to further expand on this but want to make sure it is becoming clearer to those not already conversant with the subject. Charlie 15:32, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
- I've rearranged things a bit, and I think it's a little clearer now to those of us unfamiliar with the subject -- can you check that all the facts are still correct? --Alynna 16:33, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
- Looks pretty good to me. I didn't actually write the initial entry and have a little trouble with the term 'entertainment control' since it really isn't a common term but I don't have a good handle on exactly what term to use generically since things like lighting control, sound control, rigging control, pyro control, etc. are rarely referred to generically. I think I will make one more little edit.... Charlie 22:16, 25 October 2005 (UTC)