Talk:Show No Mercy
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[edit] GA on hold
A good article overall. Just a few things that need to be touched up first. Month-year combinations don't need a comma (December 1983 instead of December, 1983). Delink Slayer in the producer section of the infobox. It'd be helpful to use an appositive to show who some of the people are (e.g. "guitarist Kerry King"). "Slayer were": I could be wrong, but I believe the convention is to refer to bands like Slayer in the singular (at least the American convention is, since the subject is American). "Jeff (Hanneman)": if Hanneman wasn't part of the original quote, use brackets instead of parentheses. Congrats to WP Slayer, by the way, for pumping out some quality articles. ShadowHalo 02:16, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
- Wooo that was quick :O I changed everything, but was unsure from the brackets, changed it from ( to [. Thanks for the quick review :) M3tal H3ad 06:41, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
- Looks good. I didn't notice at first, but there are some minor problems with quotations marks. There shouldn't be any smart quotes (“, ”, and ’); these normally come from writing in a word processing software like MS Word. Also, quotes inside quotes should have single quotes: Bob said, "Mary told me that 'This is a quotation.'" Make sure to correct that at some point; other than that, this looks like it meets WP:WIAGA. Good work! ShadowHalo 06:55, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks. M3tal H3ad 07:06, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
- Looks good. I didn't notice at first, but there are some minor problems with quotations marks. There shouldn't be any smart quotes (“, ”, and ’); these normally come from writing in a word processing software like MS Word. Also, quotes inside quotes should have single quotes: Bob said, "Mary told me that 'This is a quotation.'" Make sure to correct that at some point; other than that, this looks like it meets WP:WIAGA. Good work! ShadowHalo 06:55, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Acclaim?
The reception section seems too negative, this album definitely has its fans. Some ideas for sources [1][2] Adamravenscroft 19:03, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
[edit] no personnel?
Just a quick question: Shouldn't there be a section about the personnel? --Johnnyw talk 11:30, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Fight Till Death 83 demo clip.ogg
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BetacommandBot (talk) 20:03, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] PMRC
This organization was born in 1985, Show No Mercy was released in 1983. How did the PMRC send the letter to Slagel about the record release? --Born Again 83 (talk) 14:22, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- They sent it after it was released. M3tal H3ad (talk) 04:09, 16 February 2008 (UTC)