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[edit] Biased Rewriting

User Bandurist keeps erasing the changes made and putting in a non-neutral POV. The attempt is clearly to protray Schwartzbard as an agent of the soviets, without proper evidence or citations. Everyone associated with Schwartzbard is labeled as communist. I added the fact that this is what the Petlura camp tried to do in the trial. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.77.4.43 (talk) 22:21, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

what are your specific objections? Schwartzbard's lawyer was a communist sympathizer, and I added a source for that. I left out the part about Schwartzbards brother because it was not sourced, and the same thing about crossing illegaly into Romania. If you object to other things, please point out the specific ones so we can address them, thanks. Ostap 23:51, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
The phrase "Communist sympathizer, the same lawyer who represented the Soviet consul in France." France" is a clear innuendo. It again carries a "guilt by association" connotation and hints that Schwartzbard was a Soviet agent. Such information (about Torres) is best reserved for the entry of Henri Torres (no English page, but there are French and Hebrew ones). So I suggest removing it, or else put it as one of the arguments made by those claiming a soviet conspiracy. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.77.4.43 (talk) 01:41, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
How about we rephrase it and say "He was accused by Ukrainian emigrants of being a Soviet spy. According to Ukrainian historian Michael Palij, a GPU (Soviet secret police) agent named Mikhail Volodin came to Paris that August 1925, they met, and Schwartzbard began stalking Petlura. They also point out that Torres was a Communist sympathizer, the same lawyer who represented the Soviet consul in France..."? Ostap 01:48, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
Hi.
If you are new to Wikipedia, greetings. I noticed that you were not happy with some of the reversions that I have done on articles about Symon Petlura and Swartzbard.
My POV differs from yours. This is understandable.

However, just going through an article and deleting all the parts you don't like and adding materials that have little relationship to the original article is also not very correct ettiquette.

Not having the time to register a user name, and having you IP address noted for questionable edits is another problem.
If you disagree with materials that I have posted, there is a more courteous procedure by which this material can be removed or changed. Put a post in the discussion page. Ask for a citation in the article or fact that you know or think is incorrect, and wait for an appropriate period of time for a response rather than simply immediately removing material that offends you.
On the other hand asking for a thousand citiations for every trivial thing can also be quite annoying.
I can usually find the documents to cite, but keep in mind most of my activities in Wiki are weekend endeavours. I just got home from work tonight and it is 10.30 and I was up at 6.OO. It takes time to find the citations.
There is plenty of room in Wiki for your additions, but offen there are more appropriate ways of writing. In the case of Petlura there are many myths which have been exacerbated by the fact that direct discussion between cultures never took place and that various myths, distortions and were left to spin out of control. We now have a vehicle to correct this. We can either use it for the development of more understanding, or it can be used as a tool for the stirring up of more xenophobia. It also requires somepatience .
I would like to know more about the Pogroms in Proskuriv. Perhaps you could start such a project. There already is an intersting one about the Pogrom of Kishinev. Welcome to Wikipedia. Bandurist 02:57, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
User Bandurist, your response is to simply erase all the modifications to the article? There were a lot of valuable material and explanations in the version you deleted, including supportive citations for the `Soviet agent theory' by User Ostap. Also in previous versions there were many inaccuracies (e.g. the location in Paris where the assassination took place). A lot of the information in the versions you try to resurrect is either irrelevant (his brother being deported) or inflammatory in nature ('illegally' crossing the border to Rumania). Note that the entry is still far from perfect, in particular it is missing a discussion of Schwartzbard's role in organizing Jewish self-defence in 1905.
What I have done right now is is put all the material supporting the soviet connection together, with a clear lableing (it is still not perfect, but better than what was before).
About the Proskurov pogrom, you can find material here http://www.west.net/~jazz/felshtin/sitemap.html. Note that Proskurov is called Khmelnitzky today. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.77.4.129 (talk) 12:29, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

Thanks. Yes I know Proskuriv being Khmelnytsk. I gave some recitals throughout that whole area 15 years ago. The area is quite interesting to me - particularly in the way the cultures of the local population in the neighbouring Ternopil differ from that of the population of Khmelnytsk - only because the administration was different.

So our job now is to discuss the following:

1) Add and check the supportive citations for the `Soviet agent theory' 2) Check for the location in Paris where the assassination took place. 3) Discuss the irrelevancy of his brother being deported. 4) Inflammatory nature of his 'illegally' crossing the border to Rumania. 5) Schwartzbard's role in organizing Jewish self-defence in 1905.

Lets see if we can work together to overcome these problems in a mutual manner.Bandurist 18:42, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

Missing details about Schwartzbard:

His childhood: he was the first child to survive after three older brothers dying. His mother died when he was young. Afterwards he was an apprentice to a watchmaker.

That certainly whould be included - BAN

The 1905 Pogroms: He participated in the the Jewish self defence in Balta. He was wanted by the authorities and moved to a border town, was arrested released and then escaped to Austro-Hungary.

This also explains a part of his hitory and should also be included - BAN

1917-1919: Schawtzbard participation in organizing orphanages and in Jewish self defence groups (again Balta).

The assassination: Petlura being in Paris was no secret. A Ukrainian exiles newspaper wrote about it and had his picture with Pilsudsky.

Petlura in fact wa the editor of the newspaper Tryzub which he founded and was very active among the Ukrainian exile community in Paris organizing a library of Ukrainian books in Paris, but I don't see anywhere abouthis being in Paris was secret. - BAN

The trial: much information is missing about the witnesses, both for the prosecution and the defence and their cross examination. Without it, it is hard to figure out how the jury acquitted him.

This maybe worthy of a seperate article because of its significance and because of the ammount of material to sift through. It is very difficult to understand why an aquittal came about. Often they may find the person guity and sentence him to time served because of a strong reason. He did murder Petlura. It was witnessed. He did surrender and it was reported over and over so there is no misunderstanding that he did it. The problem is in why the aquittal? What was the reason for the aquittal. Under what laws was he aquitted. OJ they couldn't prove beyond a shadow of a doubt. Here there was no doubt. Why the aquittal and no verdict?- BAN

The Soviet agent theory: all aspects should be covered together. Irrelevant information should be minimized (e.g. his brother).

It would be good to put together the Soviet agent information together, however I do feel that the information about his brother is relelvant.- BAN

Petlura's role in the pogroms: this is best discussed in Petlura's entry.

Makes sense- BAN

References: an important missing reference is the Book "Pogromchik: The assassination of Simon Petlura", by Saul S. Friedman.

An important source particularly if we put together a special article about the actual trial- BAN

Another pointer should be that Schwartzbard papers are archived in YIVO Institute for Jewish Research in New York. http://www.yivoinstitute.org

I think they are referenced here. I remember going through them. An amzing job they do inthe archives. _ BAN

Without these changes the entry looks like a piece of Ukrainian Nationalistic propaganda.

Note just how biased is the following piece
"During the trial Schwartzbard was quartered in the Soviet Consulate."
He was actually in prison all along
That makes sense if you are on a trial for murder. I wonder why that is there and where it came from? - BAN
I noticed that some of the minor details in this article were written a few years ago and have some inaccuracies. Ostap 03:49, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
"The core of Schwartzbard's defence was that he was avenging the deaths of victims of the pogroms. After a trial lasting eight days, and succumbing to pressure from prominent Jewish activists and academics,
This is pretty blatant anti-Jewish.
To me it doesn't sound anti-Jewish, but maybe I am not picking up the nuances that you are. Who were the people who applied pressure? I think I remember in a Time article Einstein was one person, but who in particular sent letters of support. This sentence may be better to be discussed more on an article specifically dealing with the trial - Bandurist 03:15, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
Bandurist, I removed that line because it does seem to imply that he was only aquitted because of pressure. While it is probably true that there was pressure from Jewish activists and academics, there was certainly pressure from Ukrainian diaspora in France and Ukrainians abroad as well, no? In my opinion, I don't think it should be included. Ostap 03:49, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
the jury acquitted him.
  • Okay, I read over the trial part and you're right, so I removed the biased "prominent Jewish activist" line. And the part about the Soviet consulate, I take your word on so it is out to. If you want to add more about his biography please do so. I don't see anywhere in the article where it says Petlura's being in Paris was a secret, so I couldn't do anything about that. As for information about the witnessess, this I am trying to get. If you read below, we have already come to a conclusion that there should be separate a "Soviet agent argument" section. Now we are trying to figure out what to put in it. Please refrain from making claims about nationalistic propaganda, it won't really help anything. And please create an account. Ostap 02:11, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

I added some information about Schwartzbard's archive and ways in which he was commemorated. What is the real source for this : "He participated in a movie living for a time in Hollywood with his family where he played himself in a film made about the Assassination[1]."

There is no trace of a movie about Schwarzbard in the imbd. Also what is the source that he moved to the US? all the sources have him leaving in France before going on the South African expedition.

I removed this until clarification.

Mashkin 00:51, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

The source for the part about coming to the US and the movie about the assassination comes from [[1]] the Ukrainian Weekly which is credible. However, after reading this article, you are correct. It doesn't say he lived there, only that he toured or traveled in the US for a time. And it says he considered playing himself in a movie. I propose putting it back in, clarifying that he was only traveling in America, and he only considered playing a part in a movie. Ostap 01:04, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
If the movie was never made, I don't see the point of mentioning it. Reading the article does not give confidence that it was more than a rumor stemming from a visit by Schwartzbard in the US.
I changed Palestine to Israel and it reads better, though it is bit odd since the political entity did not exist.

Mashkin 02:10, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Perhaps saying the Land of Israel? I think calling it Israel sounds better, especially considering the situation. About the movie, I would consider it notable. How about this: "While he was traveling in the United States, it was rumored that he considered playing the part of himself in a movie about the assassination." Ostap 02:18, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Wrong Quotes

Wrong quotes has been used which allegedly were used by Schwartzbard during the assassination. The official transcripts of the trial states:

"Here's my chance, I thought. 'Are you Petlura?' I asked him. He did not answer, simply lifting his heavy cane. I knew it was he.

"I shot him five times. I shot him like a soldier who knows how to shoot, and I shot straight so as not to hit any innocent passerby. At the fifth shot he fell. He didn't say a word. There were only cries and convulsions.

"When I saw him fall I knew he had received five bullets. Then I emptied my revolver. The crowd had scattered. A policeman came up quietly and said: 'Is that enough?' I answered: 'Yes.' He said: 'Then give me your revolver.' I gave him the revolver, saying: 'I have killed a great assassin.'

"When the policeman told me Petlura was dead I could not hide my Joy. I leaped forward and threw my arms about his neck."

"Then you admit premeditation?" asked the judge.

"Yes, yes!" replied M. Schwartzbard, his face lit with fanatical exultation.

[2]


[edit] 1) `Soviet agent theory'

With the fall of the Soviet system the archives were open for a period of time, however, since then the Russian archives have been closed. The Ukrainian ones are still open but they fdo not containe everything the Soviet Union was doing. The current reseach in Ukraine by scholars studying the previous KGB archives is to accept the Soviet agent theory, however, Ukrainian scholars have not found the document that is the proverbial "smoking gun". Bandurist 19:02, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

This should be included, but to compromise with the IP, why not include all of the information about the theory in a separate paragraph titled "Soviet agent theory". It is important to note, that like you say, there has never been any actual proof just a whole lot of evidence. Nonetheless, it is still technically only a theory, and may never be proven. Ostap 19:44, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
The Ukrainian government portal at http://www.kmu.gov.ua/control/uk/publish/article?art_id=36813166&cat_id=32395 that he was a Soviet Agent. I remember reading an article which I downloaded from the Ukrainian State Security Services research centra that also stated it. I will try to once again find the link. Do you really think a seperate section is warranted? I'm OK with the idea but on the other hand am not too keen on it. The current Ukrainian government is firm that he was (although I still can't remember seeing the proof. Maybe have IP decide .Bandurist 20:03, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
I agree, it does seem very likely that he was a Soviet agent, and I have heard that Ua government considers him such. But there would have to be solid proof, and good citations, to make that claim. The evidence suggests he very well might have been, but that might is the problem. If I recall, there has never been an established link between him and the Soviets, and with all the archive and acessibility issues, it would be hard to find proof. My proposal was just a compromise for the IP, if there are any better ideas I would be for them also. We probably have to wait for IP to see what he thinks. Ostap 20:11, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
The whole thing about being a Soviet agent is that you hide your identity. We know that Swartzbard's brother was evicted from France for his active communist views. We know that Swartzbard returned to Russia to fight with Kotovsky with the Communists against the armies of the UNR. I assume Shwartzbard left Russia because of some anti-Tsarist action in 1905. His knowledge of Yiddish would have made it pretty easy to live in German speaking countries. His knowledge of Romanian-Moldavian coming from Bessarabia also would have made French understandable. Hiding under a Anarchist moniker can be explained. If he was a Soviet agent his associations withthe Soviet Consulate, his quartering and the use of a French lawyer sympathetic to the Communists is then understood. I can't understand why he was not supported by a lawyer from the Jeish community if he did such a service to the memory of those Jews who perrished? The Soviets wanted Petlura big time and squeezed the Poles considerably. In 1928 those UNR Soldiers who returned to Ukraine under the amnesty all were either executed or interned. the Soviets were big on assassinations. Look at Trotsky, Bandera, Konovaletz and a whole list of others. Look at Kuznetzov and recently Lytvynenko. Bandurist 03:16, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
Bandurist, I completely agree. As I said the evidence overwhelmingly suggests it, but as you said there is no "smoking gun", so we can't state definitively that he was an agent. I believe the situation is covered under WP:OR. I don't object to any of this material being included, and I don't think the IP does either. I think what he wants is to have the evidence put under a specific category labeled "Soviet agent theory", and not placed all over the article. My understanding is that IP objects to having this material in the sections of the trial and so on, because he says it is like guilt by association, and implies that he was a Soviet agent without proof. I think he has a point. Ostap 03:33, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
I agree. Too many articles I have read have this guilty by association thing. It may be better to put all this into one special category and let the reader decide, but how do you write such a paragraph so that the "goat is whole and the wolf is stuffed"? Bandurist 04:21, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
To be honest, I really don't know. You and I are probably looking at this the same way, and the IP is looking at it from a different view. Hopefully we can get it to a point where we are all happy. You can go ahead and write what you like, especially with all those sources you got, and I am sure our IP will come by and give his view. Then I guess we can work from there. I would support a section entitled something like "Soviet agent theory", or "Soviet agent argument" placed between the "The assassination" and "After the Trial" sections that lists out all the evidences that he was one. Maybe also saying in the lead that he was thought to be a Soviet agent by some. Ostap 04:41, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
This is all very unconvincing. At best guilt by association. Schwartzbard's life after the acquital do not suggest any soviet connections. But given the prevalance of the view by Ukrainian sources it should be covered.
We are not trying to make the conclusion he was guilty. Convinving or not it is a widely held theory by some. Information such as his life after trial with no soviet connections can be included also as what is used as a rebuttal to the agent argument. Ostap 02:23, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] 2) Paris location of assassination.

We should let the User IP edits stand regarding this issue, as they seem more accurate. Ostap 19:44, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

Currently on the articles it has "a Paris boulevarde".

IP has rue Racine The Ukrainian government portal has rue Racine The edits currently are not inaccurate however IP is more specific, but does the street matter? Does rue Racine have any meaning to anyone in the Anglo speaking world? I agree that IP's edits here are more specific. Bandurist 20:12, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] 3) Irrelevancy of his brother being deported.

I feel that this information is relevant for a number of reasons. It sheds light on the man and his associations. If his brother was deported from France for having Communist leanings and being an active communist it suggests certain conclussions. a) That his brother may also be a Communist b) That his brother may hide his Communist sympathies in order to not be deported as well. What do you think? Bandurist 19:02, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

I say it should be included under the Soviet agent theory as evidence. Ostap 19:44, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] 4) Inflammatory nature of his 'illegally' crossing the border to Rumania.

The fact that he crossed the border illegally (i.e. without passport or visa has paricular connotations. a) He had no money to buy the required documents b) He was escaping repurcussions in Russia c) He (as an Anarchist had no respect for the government and did what ever he pleased.

If we look at b) What was he escaping from in Russia. 1905 was a difficult year. A year of Revolution. Anybody involved in the massive srtikes and revolts initially got the death sentence. Such writers as Hnat Khotkevych didn't participate in any strikes but as a secretary of the railwayworker's Union he was warned to leave the country which he did fleeing to Lviv in Austria-Hungary. 1905 was also the year that the Blacvk hundreds were particularly active and the call by some Russian circles "Beat the jews and Save Russia" went out and a series of massive pogroms were launched. Could this be a reason fr him crossing the border?Bandurist 19:02, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

I see why "illegally" should be included, but perhaps to compromise with the IP it should be written in a different way. Ostap 19:44, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
Petlura also escaped from Poland to Hungary and then Vienana in 1923 illegally. There was speculation that the Poles were about to cave in to the demands of the Bolsheviks and hand him over. However they write specifically that he escaped. He may have escaped with the help of the Poles in order to release pressure on them from the Bolshevyuks. Anyway, how do you sufggest rephrasing it.Bandurist 20:16, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
I'd let the IP propose a different way, he is the one who actually took issue with it. I say include it as it is, but he is obviously against it. If he has an idea on how to make it less inflammatory, he can say. I really don't know how to rephrase it. Ostap 20:18, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] 5) Schwartzbard's role in organizing Jewish self-defence in 1905.

Could this be a reason for him fleeing Russia in 1905? Bandurist 19:02, 4 October 2007 (UTC) In the link to Shwartzbard's bio there is no mention of his association with the Jewish self-defence in 1905. Maybe this is the reason he fled Russia? But I ask myself, if this was so important why was it not mentioned in the bioBandurist 03:19, 5 October 2007 (UTC)


[edit] Sources

The Anarchist Encyclopedia herehas many factual eras. Small but neumerous starting from it stating that Izmail is in Moldova when it in fact is in Ukraine. It mentions his arrests and deportations and mentions him joining the Bolshevik army in Odessa in 1917 and that he was active in Communist groups. It also mentions the lobbying group of publicly recognized personalities, such as Henri Bergson, Romain Rolland, Albert Einstein, & Alexander Kerensky volunteered to testify on Shalom Schwarzbard's behalf. It also states that "Torres had joined the French Communist Party.

The Institute for Jewish research here is more scholarly and to me sounds more credible and less POV. Here it gives much more information and it seems to be more accurate. Here it states "He travelled through Lemberg (Lwów, now L'viv, Ukraine), Budapest, Vienna, Italy," The Lviv (ah notice L'viv) connection has been missed totally in the article In 1917 Shalom Schwarzbard returned to Russia and joined the Red Guard in Odessa.

This bit is well crafted in a NPOV manner: During the civil war of 1918-1920, while Ukrainian forces defended national independence of the Ukraine against the Bolshevik armies and Polish territorial claims, chaos and lawlessness were rampant in the Ukraine. The pogroms that took place in the Ukraine during this time shocked the public with their brutality and and the number of their victims. According to conservative estimates 50,000 Jews fell victim to these massacres.

Also Victims and their relatives, as well as public figures concerned with this wave of violence held Symon Petliura responsible for the atrocities committed in the Ukraine. A Ukrainian nationalist and journalist, Symon Petliura, became Minister of War (holovny ataman) in the Ukrainian Central Rada, and later President of the Directorate. Although the central Ukrainian government functioned under conditions of civil war, in the eyes of the victims of the pogroms and their relatives, Symon Petliura did little to stop the pogroms. As the commander of the Ukrainian army, he was therefore perceived as the ultimate perpetrator of the atrocities.

It sounds very similar to the way some Ukrainian articles are crafted about various sensitive areas.

Once again well crafted: Both Shalom Schwarzbard and Symon Petliura immediately became public symbols. While Shalom Schwarzbard was called a Jewish national hero and appeals were made to Jews all over the world to contribute financially to his defense, Symon Petliura suddenly became a martyr of the Ukrainian émigré community and his death unified the hitherto divided Ukrainian exiles. Many Ukrainian emigrés believed that Shalom Schwarzbard was a Bolshevik agent who carried out the assassination under orders from Moscow.

In the archives thuis is interesting There are relatively few materials directly related to Shalom Schwarzbard's trial or his act. Among the exceptions are letters written by Elie Dobkovsky who participated in the trial with Shalom Schwarzbard and in his long letter tried to explain why he witnessed against him, and Shalom Schwarzbard's letters to J.M. Zalkind written from the prison.

Why would she witness against Shwartzbard and then write a ;letter of exlanation to him? Ukrainian weekly http://www.ukrweekly.com/Archive/1996/209613.shtml from 1926 states: According to historian Michael Palij, a GPU (Soviet secret police) agent named Mikhail Volodin came to Paris that August. Allegedly, they met and Schwartzbard began stalking the UNR leader. Following his former ally Gen. Pilsudski's seizure of power in Poland on May 12, 1926, Petliura was warned by fellow members of the UNR government-in-exile and senior Ukrainian military officers that his life was in danger, but he ignored their advice and did not go into hiding.

According to a report in Le Figaro, on May 25, 1926, Schwartzbard was called away by a telephone call from lunch with his wife, returned and left hurriedly soon after.

At around 2 p.m., Petliura lunched alone at the restaurant Bouillon Chartier on rue Racine. At 2:15, as he was walking home, he stopped to look in a shop window at the corner of Boulevard St.-Michel.

A man approached, and called out in Ukrainian, "Are you Mr. Petliura?" Petliura turned to see Schwartzbard advancing on him. "Defend yourself, you bandit," the assassin shouted (as he recounted in his deposition to a judge), and as Petliura raised the cane in his right hand, Schwartzbard fired into him three times, exclaiming "This, for the pogroms; this for the massacres, this for the victims."

According to an eyewitness, the victim sank to the ground saying "Enough, enough, my God." The gunman fired four more shots into the prone man. Petliura was taken to the Hopital de la Charité on rue Jacob, where he died about 20 minutes later, at the age of 47.

The Institute for Jewish research gives a very good summary. That should definately be included. Very well done getting these good sources. I think you should go ahead and put them in the article. Ostap 04:25, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] More sources

  • "Petliura, Symon," "Schwartzbard Trial," "Pogroms," Encyclopedia of Ukraine, Vol. 3, 4 (Toronto: University of Toronto Press, 1993);
  • Michael Palij, "The Ukrainian-Polish Defensive Alliance," (Edmonton: CIUS Press, 1995); Dokument Sudovoyi Pomylky (Paris: Natsionalistychne Vydavnytstvo v Evropi, 1958);
  • "L'Assassinat de l'Hetman Petlioura," "Un Crime Politique, M. Petlioura, ancien chef du gouvernment ukrainien, a été tuer hier au Quartier Latin," "L'Assassinat de l"Hetman Petlioura," Le Figaro, May 26, May 27, June 3, 1926.


[edit] Another iffy section

After reading In 1917, while travelling to Odessa to join the Red Guards, Schwartzbard was reportedly told of Petlura's responsibility for pogroms in the Ukraine, though it is debated that Petlura was ever involved in them at all. I ask 1917 ? In 1917 Petlura had not had any involement with the Ukrainian army ubntil 1918 and he was not the head of the government until February 1920. Can anyone give a source for this statement? To me the statement sound false, at least the date is inaccurate Bandurist 12:59, 13 October 2007 (UTC)

This part also seems to me difficult to understand "After a trial lasting eight days the jury acquitted Schwarztbard and ordered the family of Petlura to compensate him for his expenses.[2]" Why would the Petlura family be ordered to pay compensation to the murdered after a murder trial? Bandurist 01:40, 14 October 2007 (UTC)

The trial was a civil one as well, not only a criminal one and there were two lawyers representing the family in addition to the official prosecutor. Schwarzbard received compensation for his legal expenses as a result of this prosecution. This facts indicates what the jury thought of the assassination.

Mashkin 01:18, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

I edited the opening of the article. I don't know how the Publicit was born (Bandurist added it). Did you mean publisher? Anyway, this opening should only be for things that he is really well known, otherwise we will write all the article in the opening paragraph. Poet should stay, since someone may want to check who is the writer of a poem and lookup the name. The fact that he was Jewish and an anarchist should stay as well, since they were defining characteristics of his life. And of course to mention the reason he is known - the Petlura assassination. But there is no need for writing that he was a "twice convicted bank robber", nor that he was a decorated veteran or an encyclopedia salesman and fund raiser. An issue to consider is whether to mention the fact that he was acquitted of the assassination. Perhaps mention it with the trial. Maye something i.e. "known primarily for the assassination of the Ukrainian politician Symon Petliura and the sensational trial that resulted."

Mashkin 01:18, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

To (ab)User:Mona23653, you have inserted 'convicted bank robber' again, with no explanation, in spite of my above reasoning. As I suggested elsewhere, why don't you start the Mona Encyclopedia of Ukrainian History and leave Wikipedia alone. Mashkin 15:45, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Listen, you know what? why don't you start your own? seriously? why are you defending a Soviet agent so much? Face it, he was a convicted bank robber. Why do you keep on removing it? If you want your own version of history, then go make your own mashkinpedia, or whatever you wanna call it. BUt here, the point is, to lay out trues facts about his life.

Mona23653 03:07, 27 October 2007 (UTC)mona23653

I adhere to the NPOV, the fundamental principle of Wikipedia, whereas you specifically confessed to not doing so. Therefore I recommended that you start your own encyclopedia where you can have just your POV - I am serious, it is not such a bad idea, you can use the material from Wikipedia. (Just as an example for my following of NPOV, I recently added the relationship of Petlura with Jabotinsky, which can be interpreted as supportive of the view that minimizes his role in the pogroms). As for the issue of writing in the opening sentences of the entry on Schwartzbard about the banck robberies, as I wrote above, it does not make sense to write his whole biography in the opening sentences. About the `soviet agent theory' what I admit or not is not the issue. Given that so many Ukrainian outlets stick to the theory it means that it is worth mentioning, but it should me the way the case is presented. Btw, note that this is what the prosecution in Schwartzbard's trial tried to do and failed (you seem to pay a lot of attention to verdicts in trials, so you may want to take this into account). Mashkin 13:34, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
Come on guys, lets keep the discussion about the article, not each other. Ostap 17:40, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

What point of view is there? You're the one here, who denies the facts. Is the fact that he was a repeat offender, who twice escaped from jail a point of view? He commits one crime, is sentnced, and escapes, then goes to Hugary, robs a bank, gets caught, and jailtime, and escapes, then he goes to Paris, and kills a person. He was a dangerous repeat-offener, and a criminal. I don't understand how you could classify that that's a POV.Mona23653 13:52, 2 November 2007 (UTC)mona23653