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Shimon Peres was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. Reviewed version: May 1, 2007

Shimon Peres was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. Reviewed version: March 11, 2008

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[edit] It was reported in Maariv.

Mr. Peres made a speech at the "Conference of Commerical Bureaus" held on 10th October 2007 in Tel-Aviv. Is it possible to listen to this speech somewhere on the net? Thanks! 91.83.21.173 10:19, 13 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA fail

I'm sorry, but I cannot pass the article at this time. Here are some things for you to work on before renominating the article:

• There are entire sections and paragraphs without inline citations. An article needs to be fully referenced to be a GA. This is the biggest issue with the article.
• Numbers under 100 should be spelled out.
• Paragraphs need to be longer than a sentence or two. Either merge shorter paragraphs together, into larger ones, or delete them entirely.
• A couple of the citations need to be formatted with the Template:cite web.

Good luck. Nikki311 03:09, 11 March 2008 (UTC)