Talk:Sheffield High School (South Yorkshire)
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[edit] NPOV??
The present day section comes across as biased at the worst and unreferenced at the least. Statements like "the vast majority" are unhelpful. What do you consider to be the vast majority? 60%? 75%? 90%? 99%? This needs proper referencing and the style needs to be changed to take the subjectivity out.
General notes on this article -There aren't any references. I'll edit the article to add as many as possible.
-The tone is off for Wikipedia. Some odd choices of trivia to put there.
-A section with notable alumni probably wouldn't go amiss. I don't have a lot of time to spend editing this page and researching alumni but I'll add what I can. There's quite a lot of rewriting needed here.
Edits I made - changed a few typos/grammatical errors and added in that alumni section, although I don't have the information that would allow me to flesh it out much further. This article really, really needs references. At the moment it just reads like a current member of staff wrote it. I've added in tags and changed the typo of "Sherriff" (!! wtf??!) to Shireff. Ohgodiva (talk) 00:37, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
I have updated some of the info to substantiate claims made in this section. [user geatkins]22.28 15 March 2008
I have added more info and a sixth form section and more history Emily bear (talk) 06:02, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
