Talk:Shakumbhri Devi
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[edit] Copy edit and cut
I gave this article a badly-needed copy edit, and I've removed these paragraphs: "Legend tells that this goddess helped the living creatures of survive only upon plants and vegetable, when no wate was available on this earth, for full-long hundred years. Hence , she was know as Shakumbhari Devi . i.e the goddess who feeded upon vegetable.
Starting in terms of botanical-science, there exists a form of energy behind the growth of plants and vegetable; the evolution of this energy is caused due to the multiplication and compounding of atoms. The same energy has been worshipped as goddess Shakumbari in the legends."
The first paragraph is barely comprehensible and I've tried to paraphrase its content within the article. The second paragraph asserts it's based in biological science and then moves into what I might call theistic philosophy -- which is asserted as fact. If it can be rephrased in terms of either religion or science, by all means return it. Accounting4Taste 18:57, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Linkages created
The article has been linked to two other articles; on this subject itself and on Sambhar Lake.Wiki dr mahmad (talk) 21:30, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
