Talk:Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band (song)

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[edit] GA Talk for article

This should be put up for GA again.--andreasegde (talk) 12:20, 1 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] GA on hold

• "on the The Beatles' "Sgt. Pepper" album." - why the quotation marks on the album?

Y Done --andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• "Barry Miles writes in his book Many Years From Now" - is this necessary? Just say what happened...

Y Done --andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• "According to his diaries, Mal Evans may have also contributed to the song." - change EL to a wlink here

Y Done --andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• Eeek...overuse of dashes. Can you cut down on this?

Y Done--andreasegde (talk) 17:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• Format dates in the Recording section, and merge with the prior section if there's no more info available

Y Done--andreasegde ([[User talk:Andreasegde|tal Y Done --andreasegde (talk) 17:57, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• "and with a rockier feel. " - can you reword this...?

Y Done --andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• "It was originally released in the UK on 1 June 1967, and in the US on 2 June 1967 on the "Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band" LP." - format dates, put album in italics not quotes

Y Done--andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• Several of the songs wlinked in the Release section have been wlinked previously

Y Done--andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• "The song, starting with "It was twenty years ago" was chosen amongst others to commemorate that Live 8 took place approximately twenty years after Live Aid." - needs ref

Y Done --andreasegde (talk) 17:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• "with McCartney in the audience.[23][24][25] " - does this need 3 refs?

Y Done--andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• Some of the song info in the "Other performances" could be dubbed OR...

Y Done--andreasegde (talk) 18:14, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• "On 23 May 2007" - format date

Y Done--andreasegde (talk) 17:52, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

• I don't think the "Memorabilia" section is necessary in this article

Y Done--andreasegde (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

Leave a note on my talk page when done. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H₂0) 08:51, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

Will do. --andreasegde (talk) 17:00, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

Passed. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂0) 09:44, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

I thank you, Dihydrogen Monoxide. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andreasegde (talk • contribs) 12:11, 12 February 2008 (UTC)