User talk:Serendipityblue

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Just a quick note to say hi but please do read WP:NPOV before you make further edits. Your advocacy of warmbloods and sport horses is admirable, but may be pushing wikipedia guidelines on tone and neutral point of view. Some of us longer-term editors have spent hours getting the peacock words and "laundry lists" out of the horse articles and they need to stay out. Click the "help" link in the menu on the left of the page to review some of the basics of editing. Thanks. Montanabw^(talk) 17:03, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

Nice edit to Sport horse, that's what we are after! I did a little bit of wordsmithing, just for flow. There may be a better adjective than a "heavier" build, but it was the best I could come up with at the moment... Montanabw^(talk) 19:04, 30 October 2007 (UTC)