User:Seraphimblade/Desk
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| Cleanup Taskforce |
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| Desk Queue: 7 |
| Areas of Expertise
Copyediting for spelling, grammar, and flow; trimming excessive length and detail; fact-checking; rooting out original research; administrative assistance if required. |
I'm a participant in the Cleanup Taskforce. Please add up to 7 open issues below by following the instructions at the Cleanup Taskforce page.
Current or pending tasks: (2)
Spore - In-universe and excessive plot/gameplay summary, lack of real-world context, too fannish.
[edit] Wildlife Park 2
The article is currently in urgent need of cleanup. Overusage of lists and little actual text. Punctuation and spelling are fine, but a basic cleanup should fix most of the problems. Thanks in advance. --Cuddly Panda 09:05, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
- I don't think the lists are too long as much as the gameplay section is too short. RJFJR 13:26, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
- And there's that aswell. We need you, Cleanup Taskforce! --Cuddly Panda 08:59, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
Definitely needs work. I've gotten a start by cutting (a lot of cutting, the complete lists are the stuff of game guides), and will try to find some independent source material from which to work. Seraphimblade Talk to me 08:14, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
