Talk:Servant of Two Masters
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[edit] Unencyclopedic
I'm tagging the page as unencyclopedic. We have two synopses for some reason, and neither feels like a neutral synopsis, but rather a review or nonneutral summary. I'm fixing some of the worst ones, and if I have time I'll try to improve the page generally. dcd139 (talk) 04:51, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
- I went through and removed or altered anything in the first synopsis that seemed written in non-encyclopedic style. I looked at the second synopsis and decided it was a) superfluous and b) irredeemable, so it's been deleted. Other improvements/suggestions would be highly appreciated. dcd139 (talk) 05:09, 7 March 2008 (UTC)