Talk:Serge Lehman

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[edit] Who or where? Hardly encyclopedic

The article says:
"Serge Lehman (born Pascal Fréjean on July 12 1964) is the pseudonym of a French science fiction writer".
That is ambiguous. Usually (born X on D) means born at X on D, yet Pascal Fréjean seems a possible French personal name. Google was no help. Should it read:
"(né Pascal..)"
or equivalently
"(born on ..) is ... of French .. writer P S"
or is the alternative misinterpretation
"(born at P S ....)
what was intended?--SilasW 23:10, 3 November 2007 (UTC)

This was not one of my better starts, but I'd hoped for improvement from others. That didn't entirely come through so I did some myself.--T. Anthony (talk) 01:48, 30 December 2007 (UTC)