Talk:Second Mexican War

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It's not clear enough that this "war" is purely fiction. The whole page reads like a real war. If I hadn't just finished reading the book, and knew a lot about history, I would think that this actually happened. -- unsigned


I have attempted to address this by modifying the first sentence of the article to conform to Manual of Style (writing about fiction) -- Example Articles -- Miscellaneous, see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style_%28writing_about_fiction%29. 199.64.0.252 21:01, 9 May 2007 (UTC)