The following comments were left by the assessors: (edit ยท refresh)
- Writing needs some work - spelling and density of writing, introduction of many ideas with which the average reader will not be familiar.
- Feels like a loose collection of topics which happen to be related to the Scythian Monks, not a coherent article on the topic.
- No inline citations - not easy for new editors/readers to confirm the information here, or work on improving the writing, as it is not clear where the information comes from.