Talk:Scars (band)

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I initially only glanced at this. However, after a second look, I must say it is well done. A few things however.

• The lead needs to be expanded, so that it's one or two paragraphs.
• Some of the wording is not in an encyclopedic tone. "From that album sprang perhaps the most recognizable Scars song out there, "All About You"," and "Nevertheless, now that they have been overcome, a new generation of fans is enjoying Scars music again."

You can look at some of the other band articles on the good articles page. You may also want to bring the article to some copyeditors. Also, checkout the previous peer review. Mahanga^Talk 21:43, 4 April 2007 (UTC)