Talk:Saturday (novel)
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I think the part that says "... when she does, she reveals she is pregnant" should be changed to "... when she does, Perowne notices she is pregnant."
The word "revealed" kind of implies that she mentions that she's pregnant or something, when in fact perowne deduces that she's pregnant by noticing the "bulge"
