Talk:Sathya Sai Baba movement/Comments

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The presence of self-described "stub" sections determines that this article, for all of its length, can only be counted as a start. The article could use more frequent citations, generally at least one per paragraph. Also, there could probably be rather a lot done stylistically to improve the article. Several paragraphs are only one sentence long, when generally one would hope for at least three sentences per paragraph. Far too many sentences and paragraphs start with the word "He" as well. I will place the article on the attention list, so that I or other members of the project can be reminded to return to it for some of the stylistic attention it requires. Badbilltucker 15:20, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, I agree with the assessment, except that the presence of stub sections indicate a start class which I find a bit exaggerated. Some more references have already been added. Most of the other described problems can also be fixed quite easily unless I get banned by the arbcom. Andries 00:47, 9 February 2007 (UTC)