Talk:Sara Payne: A Mother's Story

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[edit] Article Quality

This is not an enclyclopaedic style article. It is full of narrative and reads like a school essay or a book report. The narrative style could even have been copied from elsewhere.

Please can someone pick this up and wikify and clean it up. Fiddle Faddle 21:39, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

I have attempted to do some cleanup work on this. It needs to be pared down drastically, but I've never read the book so I don't feel comfortable editing anything out or writing a new synopsis. I added categories and the novel infobox and did a bit of organizational edting, but it still needs loads of work. --Lendorien 21:23, 1 March 2007 (UTC)