Talk:Salem, Indiana
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[edit] Clean-up details
I'm pretty sure I saw facts repeated two or three times more than they needed to be, especially the geographic ones. It wouldn't be a bad idea to double/triple-check the numbers, just to make sure they're up-to-date. The county officials list NEEDS updating, but I don't have the final results of the other day's election in my hands yet, so I'll come back later with that. Finally, I'm fairly certain I saw a bunch of POV stuff that could use fixing. Correct me if I'm wrong, but this isn't a Board of Tourism, it's an Encyclopedia. ...and sorry if I'm harsh. I live here, which means of course I'm harsh on it. :P Kell 07:02, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
- Yeap, this article has a case of "brochure-itis". Stevie is the man! Talk • Work 21:16, 18 January 2007 (UTC)
- Made substantial edits to remove all duplicated statistical data, and/or repositioned said data to the city summary section. Removed "brochure-itis" commentary, and performed substantial editorial clean-up of remaining sections. Fixed political entries with all information currently available from the city's Web site. Re-ordered information as necessary so as to offer more logical flow to the reader. Added a photo of "Riley's Place" to WikiMedia Commons, and linked same to this article. Updated external links. I rule! Macslacker 03:49, 27 August 2007 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Macslacker (talk • contribs)