Talk:Run Baby Run (Garbage song)

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	Run Baby Run (Garbage song) has been listed as one of the Arts good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can delist it, or ask for a reassessment.
September 19, 2007 Good article nominee Listed

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[edit] Re: GA nom

Just a few comments: I don't have time to fully review the article, so someone else should come along shortly.

• The major concern that strikes me is that some references are not reliable sources. I see a couple of links to fan boards.
• For the link titled "If you are interested in keeping up with Garbage reviews," I'd use the cite news template, give as much detail as possible about the original publication, then link to this in the URL field (you can use the format field to say something like 'Scanned onto fanpage').
• Refs should be consistent. Use the cite templates for all of them.
• The fair use rationale does not explain why the images are necessary. Yes, they non-replaceable, but what value do they give? Perhaps a section about the covers is needed? Same with the video still. It doesn't seem to offer critical commentary.

The JPS^{talk to me} 15:35, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA passed

Meets criteria, awarded GA. Some notes to make it better (obviously, do what's stated above by The JPS too):

• Image in Music Video should be right aligned; it conflicts with the next header.
• Rolling Stone felt that song's "tender, dreamy verses" brought to mind "Just Like Heaven" by The Cure.[40] - Put this sentence in the previous paragraph, or add more - don't leave it as a one sentence paragraph.
• Check ref spacing on ref #29.
• Fair use rationales could be expanded - [1][2]
• Don't use U.S. - Use United States instead (wikilinking and general prose).

I haven't watchlisted this page, so leave a note on my talk page if you have questions or comments. Dihydrogen Monoxide (H₂O) 01:42, 23 September 2007 (UTC)

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Dihydrogen Monoxide (H₂O) 01:42, 23 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Why database is closed?

I created new record - book Run baby run Nawrocony 11:58, 12 October 2007 (UTC)Nawrocony