Talk:Roy Masters (commentator)/Comments

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After reading Wikipeida's Roy Masters page and the following coments I have one point to make. I have found many comments Roy Masters has made very informing and helpful ..At 18 , 12 years ago I believe his gidance helped me from commiting suicide. However no matter what anyone says I know each person must think for themselves. I don't think Roy is always right nor is anyone. He helped me though. peace j.g.

[edit] Assessment comments

Some sort of infobox and photo would certainly be appropriate. Content regarding the subject's biographical info, like specific details regarding academic background, and employers would be useful. So would specific references for same. I would think many more links to other pages would be useful. Introductiory paragraph could be worked on, maybe giving some deetails regarding the three things mentioned in the opening sentence. "Made a test case for the non-medical use of hypnosis" is unreferenced, and outcome of trial is not mentioned. Writing style in general often falls short of encyclopedic standard. Sections would be advisable, as would the elimination of single-sentence paragraphs. John Carter 16:26, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

John, please review my rewrite of the article and let me know what you think. VisitorTalk 06:53, 13 August 2007 (UTC) 06:53, 13 August 2007 (UTC)