Talk:Roxy Ann Peak
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[edit] Federal Lands for Parks Act
Does anybody know anything about this act? Zab (talk) 06:00, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
- I don't personally know anything, but the information is at http://www.ci.medford.or.us/Files/Prescott%20Brochure.pdf. AKleinberg (talk) 17:12, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah I saw it there, but that's it. I find nothing in the federal record. The only thing I can think of is it must've been a county or state act, but that means hitting the historical societies and picking through their paper records. I'm actively looking for it, and will visit the Phoenix Genealogical office here in a few days.. Zab (talk) 18:13, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Assessment
Although this has improved, it is not quite B class. Its getting close. Need more geologic info than just a little on soil and it being a 30 million year old volcano. For instance types of rocks (besides just igneous). Try adding in some info about the general geologic forces working in the area, which may provide additional source material on the peak itself. Also, park hours are generally excluded. Then though I see trees in the picture, the vegetation of the peak is not covered. Beyond that, there are some tone/style issues that would need to be dealt with: "was also probably good" is not encyclopedic for instance. The WP:LEAD needs expansion, and then there are several citation/punctuation issues (proper: .[1]) (improper: [2].). But good job expanding and sourcing. Aboutmovies (talk) 10:28, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
- I was happy with "start" class for all the garbage I dumped in to it under the guise of quality work. To be honest I was really confused about the assessment until I saw that AKleinberg (talk ยท contribs) requested one. Well, I am still confused, but hey! Zab (talk) 10:50, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
- The only reason I asked for an assessment is to see what this article needs to improve on. (Thanks, Aboutmovies)! AKleinberg (talk) 15:49, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] added to Category:Mountains of Oregon
I added his to the category Mountains of Oregon even though it is already in the category Volcanoes of Oregon because it is a mountain. Some valcanoes are just holes in the ground (calderas for example).--DRoll (talk) 16:18, 18 March 2008 (UTC)