Talk:Rory Kennedy
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That last documentary is pathetic. Totally one sided, and the exact opposite of what a documentary should be.
A nuclear leak at the faciliy is simply impossible. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 205.188.116.139 (talk • contribs) 14:40, 22 May 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Rewrite
This article seriously needs to be changed. For starters - we should not have a tradgedy section, to say someone's life has been filled with pain is arguably violating WP:NPOV - and most (if not all) of the articles on the Kennedys do not have this type of section, yet what defines her "tradgedy" is family members - thus an inconsistency is created. This article should focus on her as a writer - that her greatest asset in notability. I'm not saying that it shouldn't be mentioned that she's a Kennedy - i'm just saying that shouldn't dominate an AUTHOR'S page. Daniel()Folsom T|C|U 23:23, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
- I have rewritten a lot of it. I, personally, wouldn't have put in a Family Tragedies section if I were writing the original article, but, given that there is some argument to be made that she has been personally touched by the misfortunes of the Kennedys more dramatically than many of the other Kennedys, I bolstered that section a bit and tried to write it more toward neutrality and cleaned it up some.AMProSoft 17:56, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] did some work, added cotent
Hope that my additions helped. Still new to this wiki thing. Added lots more about her films - cause that's what she'd like to be known for - and put the tragedy stuff at the bottom and shortened it. Also added more internal links. Her website for moxie has some great info. best wishes Kitten b 23:30, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
The article is much better now. I'm not sure that it needs the rewrite tag anymore. I'm new to the Wiki thing also. How do I go about suggesting the removal of the rewrite tag? Or maybe I just did suggest it. AMProSoft 03:31, 8 March 2007 (UTC)