User talk:Ronz/batesmethod
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- 0 (Lead) - not bad. May not even need much cleanup after the rest of the article has been
- 1 Bates' theories - (empty)
- 1.1 Accommodation - Much too long
- 1.2 Physiological cause of refractive errors - delete - might be something here worth merging
- 1.3 Psychological cause of refractive errors - delete - might be something here worth merging
- 1.4 Eyeglasses and contact lenses - delete - might be something here worth merging
- 2 Bates' treatments - delete - no third-party sources - replace with sourced info from subsections maybe?
- 2.1 Central fixation - delete - might be something here worth merging
- 2.2 Palming - delete - no third-party sources
- 2.3 Memory and Imagination - delete - no third-party sources
- 2.4 Shifting and Swinging - delete - might be something here worth merging
- 2.5 Sunning - delete - no third-party sources
- 3 Aldous Huxley and Margaret Corbett - some OR - duplicated in The Art of Seeing
- 4 General Criticisms - (empty)
- 4.1 Emotional consequences - delete - no third-party sources
- 4.2 Efficacy - weasel words - expand considering there's three sources for two sentences?
- 4.2.1 Claimed success - delete - no third-party sources
- 4.3 Avoidance of conventional treatment - delete - no third-party sources
- 5 Other methods - delete - might be something here worth merging
- 5.1 The "See Clearly Method" - trim - most is off-topic
- 5.2 "Natural Vision Improvement" - trim - most is off-topic, promotional
- 5.3 Biofeedback training - emphasize review article, trim/delete rest
- 6 Further reading
- 7 See also
- 8 References
