Talk:Ronnie Stephenson

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I think his name is Ronnie Stephenson and NOT Ronnie Stevenson!

True. The article text was right, the title wrong. The page has been moved to the correct title now. Fan-1967 18:24, 20 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] toned down and tidied up!

However much we might appreciate the person/band etc. about whom we are writing, wikipedia is not a fan page and does not have opinions. I realise that there are a lot of articles out there which have obviously been written by someone's PR agent, but let's try to make them stand out for what they are - hype. Serious musicians deserve a higher standard. 83.180.128.128 22:45, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] deleted text

Have just deleted the following:

He had an amazing technical ability and an incredible sense of time.

As the previous comment suggests, such language, though all-too-common in Wikipedia articles, is not suitable for an encyclopedia. Regards, --Technopat 23:19, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup

Some of the too many paragraphs consist of one sentence only. BNutzer (talk) 22:22, 17 May 2008 (UTC)