Talk:Rone
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[edit] Failed "good article" nomination
This article failed good article nomination. This is how the article, as of February 4, 2007, compares against the six good article criteria:
- 1. Well written?: Lead is too short and does not summarise the article
- Sentences are very short and do not flow as you read
- 2. Factually accurate?: references are there but they are not reliable and need better formatting.
- The stencilrevolution article was written by him and so cannot be relied on.
- The Grass roots ref mentions him only as an aside I'm not sure what the book Stencil graffiti capital : Melbourne is backing up
- Must have references from books,newspapers, online news etc. as it's very thin at the moment in this regard.
- 3. Broad in coverage?: missing biographical information on him.
- Needs information on the art he's done.
- Article reports brushes with the police and there needs to be expansion of this
- mainstream media coverage not mentioned
- 4. Neutral point of view?: unforunately as most of the information seems backed to a source that Rone wrote it's hard to regard the end product as NPOV. I'm sure that there are conflicting views on him but with a onedimensional source it's not possible to discuss it.
- 5. Article stability? Seems stable but growing - this is good
- 6. Images?: Like the street art but would be good to have a picture of tyRone
When these issues are addressed, the article can be resubmitted for consideration. Thanks for your work so far. --Peripitus (Talk) 10:44, 4 February 2007 (UTC)
- Thankyou for your time and efforts, Peripitus, I will follow your advice.
[edit] To do:
- 1. Well written?: Lead is too short and does not summarise the article
- Sentences are very short and do not flow as you read
:2. Factually accurate?: references are there but they are not reliable and need better formatting. :The stencilrevolution article was written by him and so cannot be relied on. :The Grass roots ref mentions him only as an aside I'm not sure what the book Stencil graffiti capital : Melbourne is backing up :Must have references from books,newspapers, online news etc. as it's very thin at the moment in this regard. ::* Work hard to fix this, find books, newspapers, online news (difficult. Do it anyway. Dfrg.msc
- 3. Broad in coverage?: missing biographical information on him.
- Needs information on the art he's done.
- Article reports brushes with the police and there needs to be expansion of this
- mainstream media coverage not mentioned
:4. Neutral point of view?: unforunately as most of the information seems backed to a source that Rone wrote it's hard to regard the end product as NPOV. I'm sure that there are conflicting views on him but with a onedimensional source it's not possible to discuss it. v::* Fix this. Dfrg.msc
:5. Article stability? Seems stable but growing - this is good
- 6. Images?: Like the street art but would be good to have a picture of tyRone
[edit] In progress
Give me a while and I’ll bring this article up to scratch. Dfrg.msc 1 . 2 . Editor Review 00:22, 3 January 2007 (UTC)