Talk:Romer's Tree Frog

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[edit] Inaccurate sentences

"A dark bar, extending to the eyebrows, can be seen between the eyes. The hindlegs are long and slender, with irregular brown bars. All digits have small suction discs, which allow the tree frog to suck on tree branches or leaves."

I don't like these sentences.

1) I have no idea where the dark bar goes. There is no description as to where it starts. Also, "above the eye" is better than "eyebrows", as frogs do not have hair.

2) The pads on the end of frog's toes are not suction discs. They do not work by suction. Check out the frog article, it gives a description as to how they work. Generally, I call them "toe pads" when I am talking about them in an article. --liquidGhoul 05:35, 13 March 2006 (UTC)

thansk a lot! revise the article wherever you find appropriate. :) --K.C. Tang 06:39, 13 March 2006 (UTC)