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[edit] FAC Nomination restarted

I see the article's FAc nomination has been restarted as of 1st June. Well, after about 80 screens of material built up over the article's 3rd nomination, I suppose we needed a clear-out. The benefit is, that hopefully some of the more intractible arguments will be resolved into simpler and more resolvable issues. The key thing is to keep any continued issues precisely defined, so that particular wording and facts are always kept in focus. That way, we can cut short vague and unresolvable claims that the article is "too POV", "badly written" etc. etc. Xandar (talk) 11:22, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

I am OK with a restart and I too would like to ask that any opposes point out specific problems as well as list the Wikipedia policy that is violated. I felt that the old FAC nom opposes were judging the article by unwritten policies, making up their own criteria that are no where mentioned on Wikipedia and expecting us to make changes for which there has never been consensus even when we sought such consensus on the talk pages. While some of the opposers made accusations against us saying we have only picked the "good" facts out of history for the RCC and thus made the article POV, I don't see how that has happened - the history section has lenghty mention of inquisitions, crusades, sex abuse scandal, and other failures. None of these opposers have pointed out any glaring notable event in history that we have not covered in the article. What is apparent is that they disagree that we should give both the Catholic viewpoint of this history as well as the critic viewpoint and that goes against NPOV. Our source selections reveal an equal representation of both critic and apologist historians and none can find any factual errors in the text.NancyHeise (talk) 12:10, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

I am posting the criteria that an article must meet in order to pass Featured Article. If a person supports the page or opposes it, it must be because the page does not meet one or more of these criteria - not some unwritten rule.

  • "A featured article exemplifies our very best work and features professional standards of writing and presentation. In addition to meeting the requirements for all Wikipedia articles, it has the following attributes.
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Any viewers of this page who would like to vote on whether you think this page meets this criteria, please go to the Featured article tag at the top of the page and click on the blue "Leave Comments" link. Thanks. NancyHeise (talk) 13:04, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] A reminder of WP:FAC process

Nominators are expected to respond positively to constructive criticism and to make an effort to address objections promptly.

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  • actionable objections have not been resolved; or
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It is assumed that all nominations have good qualities; this is why the main thrust of the process is to generate and resolve critical comments in relation to the criteria, and why such resolution is given considerably more weight than declarations of support.

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:13, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Medellín, 1968

Just a couple of details about the conference of Latin American bishops in 1968: I think it's important to note that the meeting was to adopt the principles of Vatican II; this links this paragraph into the section as a whole. Also, this wasn't the birth of Liberation Theology, but the point at which it began to spread significantly. (The reasons are complex, but inter alia the fact that the mass was now in the vernacular was important.) I've been trying to include this in the article, but Xandar consistently reverts. I do, however, appreciate his or her other copy-editing suggestions. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 16:34, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

I doubt if "adopt" is the right word here; "discuss the implementation of ..." maybe. Johnbod (talk) 16:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
I was reverting because I didn't see the link with Vatican II, which was already mentioned in the section. We are extremely tight on the amount of material that we can add due to the over-all size of article nearing the acceptable limit. We also have to consider Due Weight for each subject covered. Anyway. i will have another look at it later. Xandar (talk) 16:50, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Yeah, it could surely stand further copy-editing. And I was trying to ensure it was as concise as possible. (Hence "adopt" for "discuss the implementation of," though "implement" is probably closer to the truth.) The point, I think, is again that the implementation of Vatican II (or rather, the particular way it was implemented in Medellín, also with the promotion of base communities etc.) turned a scholarly movement into a mass one. It's a complicated history, and admittedly any short account has its problems. But the previous version (which NancyHeise has just restored) is way off the mark. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 16:58, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Question for clarity of Latin America section

In reading through the article again I saw Pope Benedict XVI subsequently denounced the movement as "dangerous" and the Church considers it "a return to the pre-modern notion of establishing a Christian society through the coercive machinery of political management". Is the quotation from an official Church publication that Norman is quoting, or is it a quote of Norman's opinion? I think this might need to be clarified in the text of the article. Karanacs (talk) 17:38, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

Indeed. The other problem is that the sentence actually says 'Pope John Paul II and Pope Benedict XVI have denounced the movement as "dangerous" and the Church considers it "a return to the pre-modern notion of establishing a Christian society through the coercive machinery of political management".' This is evidentally poor sourcing in that it is not immediately clear which of John Paul II and/or Benedict XVI is being referenced for the apparently direct quotation "dangerous." And if it was the latter, was he Benedict XVI at the time, or as is more likely in fact Cardinal Ratzinger? Finally, this is clearly a point on which the Church has been divided. Even if you find a suitable quotation (and I encourage you to do so), you might make clear that this is the point of view of the Vatican.
I would only note in passing that throughout this article there's a tendency to conflate the Church with the Vatican. Another problematic aspect of its approach. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 17:59, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Well, the article has pointed out that the practice continues still in Latin America. If this article is about the Catholic Church "in communion with Rome", the opinion of Vatican is more or less the opinion of Church. I'm sure that on every single Church teaching or belief there is a group of people who disagree with it while still considering themselves members of the Church; if we noted or removed every one of those instances, then the article could not talk about any Catholic teachings. -BaronGrackle (talk) 18:10, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Indeed. And it would be worth noting some of those divergences, but no, not all. But this is a particular and important case of a split within the Church, in which the Vatican says one thing, and some of the most senior cleric and scholars within what, in demographic terms, is now its "base," say another. This is worth taking account of. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 18:12, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

(outdent:) Here, for what it's worth, is rather a different take, which still points out the divisions within the Church over the issue of liberation theology. Unfortunately, there's still no direct quotation, but nonetheless...

In May 1984, Ratzinger sent a six page letter to Boff [. . .] summoning him to Rom in order to explain himself. Ratzinger suggested that Boff has distorted old Christian doctrines by reinterpreting them using a contemporary context, that is, ideological perspectives from history, philosophy, sociology, and politics, perspectives that were not fully informed by theology. Ratzinger questioned whether Boff was guided by faith or by other principles of an ideological nature and he indicated serious problems with three areas covered by Boff's book: (1) Boff seemed to suggest that Christ has not determined the specific form and structure of the Church, thus implying that other models could be as valid as the Roman Catholic one, (2) Boff seemed to suggest that doctrine and dogma cold be mediated by contemporary readings "led by the Spirit," an idea that could lead to the legitimization of fashionable trends over "timeless truths," and (3) Boff used Marxist analysis in order to assume that few within the Church owned the mans of production (forgiveness and the sacraments) and proposed a model in which theological privileges are not concentrated in the few. It is clear that the Vatican was not worried about the use of Marxist analysis but about the ownership of the Holy Spirit, which, within Boff's writings, goes out from the hierarchical Church into the Basic Christian Communities. (Aguilar 127-128)

Note, incidentally, that's what at issue is precisely the definition and structure of the Church, and who gets to speak or act in its name. To suggest that Norman's is the voice of the Church is then, quite obviously, immediately POV. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 18:22, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

OK, now I think I see. NB, that edit summary is misleading: the NYT reference had never been deleted. Also putting the citation where you've put it is misleading, but it appears to go with the Norman quotation. But I think we've found the source being used for the first half of the sentence, which I hadn't realized initially, because it's being used badly. This is the source that uses the term "dangerous," but this is not a quotation (as the RCC article text currently suggests). Moreover, this is the source that seems to suggest that both John Paul II and Benedict XVI "denounced the movement as 'dangerous'", but in fact Benedict XVI was Ratzinger at the time, as the NYT explains. This, incidentally, is why I removed the Benedict XVI mention the first time. To my knowledge, Benedict (as Benedict) has made no such pronouncement about liberation theology. (I could be wrong; but you'd have to find a source, of course.) Anyhow, so the current use of the source is triply misleading. That sentence needs a fix rather urgently. One way of doing that would be to revert to the last version that I edited. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 18:54, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

Update. Now it's even worse, because you're confusing the two sources further. You're illegitimately mixing the NYT source and the Norman quotation, and using both of them in misleading ways. (Is this a pattern throughout the article, I wonder?) --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 18:56, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

I take that back, at least in part. But what needs to be made clear is a) that neither John Paul II nor Benedict called (or have been shown to have called) liberation theology "dangerous"; you'd need to find a source to say that; and b) that it was Ratzinger who called it "a fundamental threat to the faith of the church." At present, the sentence remains unclear and misleading. But yes, I think that using that old Ratzinger quotation is fine, so long as it is clarified. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 19:00, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

My POV-detector has rung a couple of times:

The following year, the Salvadoran Archbishop Óscar Romero became the region's most famous contemporary martyr, when he was murdered by forces allied with the government, while saying mass "Martyr" sounds more like an affectation rather than an accurate descriptive. From my reading of Archbishop Romero's article, he was killed for political than religious reasons.
Hmm. I used "martyr" because I thought that would accord with the Catholic viewpoint. It's certainly the viewpoint within El Salvador. I don't think it's particularly controversial. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 19:28, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Understood, but there might be confusion given the ecclesiastical meaning of "martyr". I would suggest avoiding the colloquial usage. Nautical Mongoose (talk) 21:41, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
It seems perfectly appropriate here - see [[1]]. Johnbod (talk) 21:45, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Ah...still, the usage of the term doesn't seem to jibe with the rest of the section, especially with the superlative "most famous". Maybe it's just me. Nautical Mongoose (talk) 04:49, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
Well, "religious martyr" maybe, though given the context it seems un-needed. There are others. Johnbod (talk) 13:30, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
Theologians such as the Brazilian Leonardo Boff were silenced "Silenced"? And where's the reference?
The reference is right there (Aguilar, 121). It uses the term "silenced." He was given "a forced year of theological silence" (122) and prohibited from publishing, teaching, or speaking in public. There's probably a fancy Latin term for it, too. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 19:28, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
I missed the ref, apparently. However, the use of "silenced" sounds a bit weasel-ish, like how the church is said to "slam" this or that position. Something like "Boff was ordered to stop publishing, etc.", like the original reference, would probably sound better. Nautical Mongoose (talk) 21:41, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

Nautical Mongoose (talk) 19:19, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] One more Latin American-related thing

OK, I was just about to walk away from the computer, but saw this couple of sentences...

"In Latin America, this era saw anti-clerical regimes come to power from 1860 onward. The confiscation of Church properties and restrictions on people's religious freedoms generally accompanied secularist or Marxist-leaning governmental reforms.[290] One such regime was that of Mexico in 1860."

This is really wrong, and I sadly note that our friend Norman is the source. There were no Marxist-leaning governments anywhere in the world in 1860, let alone in Latin America. The Mexican date has to be wrong... surely (given the following sentence, about the Cristero rebellion) what's meant is the revolutionary government from 1910 onwards. NB that even that cannot really be called Marxist in any serious sense, though it was certainly secularist and (to varying degrees) often anti-Catholic, especially at the outset.

Even outside of Mexico, I can't think of any anti-clerical regimes in the nineteenth century, though there were some that were technocratic and secularist to one extent or another. These two sentences are simply wrong. --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 20:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

I know next to nothing about Latin American history, but even I know that's nonsense - try La Reforma etc. Certainly "confiscating church property"; I don't know about "restricting religious freedoms" but few countries in the world now have legislation like this (no 4 especially) in effect:

"The laws enacted at this stage, known as the Reform Laws (Leyes de Reforma) established at last the separation of Church and State.

  • On June 12, 1859 the Law nationalizing church property was announced;
  • on June 23, the civil marriage law;
  • on June 28, the organic law of Civil Registration and the Law concerning persons' marital status;
  • on June 30 , the decree that declared the end to all clerical involvement with cemeteries and burial grounds;
  • on August 11 holidays were regulated and official attendance at Church functions was prohibited."

From Reform War, our triumphalist liberal account of the civil war fought over this & similar issues. Johnbod (talk) 21:29, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

Actually many of the revolutionary Latin-American regimes from the 1820s on were anti-clerical to a greater or lesser extent. Mexico started closing down and "nationalizing" monasteries in the 1830s. For the next hundred years there was a see-saw between pro and anti-clerical regimes. Use of the term Marxist is probably confusing here, because it applies only to influences post 1880s. Xandar (talk) 00:18, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
maybe add a "later":"....accompanied secularist or, later, Marxist-leaning governmental ..." Johnbod (talk) 00:25, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
Someone already added this. NancyHeise (talk) 09:52, 5 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Catholic League

In France, a series of conflicts termed the French Wars of Religion were fought from 1562 to 1598 between the Huguenots and the forces of the French Catholic League.

I don't think this is true. This Catholic League (earlier groups had been local) was assembled in the 1580s by the Guise faction, in alliance with Spain and the pope: in forming it, they in effect rebelled against the monarchy and so ended up fighting not only the Huguenots but the Catholic forces of Henry III (as at the siege of Paris in 1589). In the earlier Wars of Religion, the Guises sided with the monarchy and the pope against the Huguenots but not under the banner of the Catholic League.

The split between Henry III and the pope was mirrored by problems between Rome and the Gallican church. The latter had independent tendencies and would not implement the decisions of the Council of Trent: for a while there was a danger of a Roman Catholic Church/Gallican Catholic Church schism, as the papacy feared. This was one reason the pope was willing to paper over the cracks with Henry IV in 1595.qp10qp (talk) 13:44, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

Nonetheless, the Catholic League were always on one side and the Huguenots on the other, weren't they? The royalists were at times fighting with and against the Huguenots, no? but if you can think of a clearer short wording, I'm sure it would be welcome. Johnbod (talk) 21:25, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

The main problem is the backdating of the Catholic League by twenty years. But I think the whole of the following passage could be improved, so lets workshop it here:

In France, a series of conflicts termed the French Wars of Religion were fought from 1562 to 1598 between the Huguenots and the forces of the French Catholic League. A series of popes sided with and became financial supporters of the Catholic League.<|ref name="Duffy177">Duffy, Saints and Sinners (1997), pp. 177–8</ref|> This ended under Pope Clement VIII, who supported King Henry IV's 1598 Edict of Nantes, which granted civil and religious toleration to Protestants.<|ref name="Vidmar233"|>Vidmar, The Catholic Church Through the Ages (2005), p. 233<|/ref|><|ref name="Duffy177"/|>

In France, the rapid growth of Calvinism forced armed confrontations between Protestants (Huguenots, as they became known) and Catholics, leading to the French Wars of Religion, fought on and off from 1562 to 1598. In 1584, the French Catholic League, an alliance of many leading French Catholics with Spain and the Papacy, was formed to oppose a Protestant succession to the throne. Henry III found himself trapped in the middle of a three-sided conflict and finally had no choice but to ally with the Huguenots against the League. King Henry IV's abjuration of the Protestant faith in 1593 was followed by his papal absolution in 1595 and the Edict of Nantes of 1598, in which, to the dismay of Pope Clement VIII, Henry granted limited religious freedoms to the Protestants.

This version is intended to give clear dates, indicate the makeup and motivation of the Catholic League, and to hint that the Edict of Nantes neither gave unlimited freedoms to Protestants nor won approval from Rome (this was by no means the end of religious conflict in France, only of major religious wars). I'd expect the existing refs to cover this, but I have plenty, if required. qp10qp (talk) 23:09, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

Looks good to me; maybe a succinct phrase about the monarchy in the middle (in both senses)? Johnbod (talk) 23:16, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
(Thanks for restoring the below/was just about to.) qp10qp (talk) 23:18, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
I was trying not to pump the length up. Which monarchy do you mean? Charles IX (St Barths and all that) Henry III (fights with the Catholic League against the Huges, then with the Huges against the League). What's also missing is something about the Gallican church, which was a real threat to Rome at this time (it unilaterally lifted HIV's excommunication!); but that's more than complex. qp10qp (talk) 23:25, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
Well exactly that they were stuck in the middle, spinning increasingly purposelessly. Johnbod (talk) 23:27, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
I've assayed an insertion above, see italics. qp10qp (talk) 23:32, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
Gallicanism is noted in the French revolution section. I am sorry but I do not like the version offered by Qp10qp because it contains weasel words which we have been careful to avoid and does not make the section more factually correct. It is also longer than the present version and size is a consideration. A reader can click on the various wikilinks to learn more details if they want to know more. NancyHeise (talk) 09:54, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
Nancy, could you point out the particular phrasing that you find problematic? It is important to provide a bit of context in the article and not rely on the wikilinks for all of that. Karanacs (talk) 13:33, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
It is only a proposal to be worked on here. But it does make the passage more accurate: it shows that the Catholic League was not formed until 1584 (and gives the reason, which relates to the death of the last Catholic heir to the throne in that year); it also shows that the French Wars of Religion included fighting between Catholics, that the Edict of Nantes did not give full toleration to the Huguenots, and that the edict was not supported by the papacy. The Gallicanism issue is perhaps too complex to include here, but there was a real fear during this time that the French Catholic church would split away from the Roman Catholic church. Wording can be worked on, but a more accurate version of the passage is surely desirable.
The significance of the Edict of Nantes was not that it granted any particularly new freedoms, but that, unlike similar previous edicts, it held. qp10qp (talk) 14:44, 5 June 2008 (UTC)

I posted a note on Qp10qp's talk page asking this person to go ahead and insert the text above with refs. I want to add that we can't really say "to the dismay" because I have this quote from Duffy's Saints and Sinners "Under the saintly but realist Pope Clement VIII (1592-1605) better counsels prevailed, and the papacy came to terms with Henri IV, accepted (though after long hesitation) the toleration granted to Protestants by the Edict of Nantes, and thereby freed itself, for the time being at least, from its unhealthy dependence on Spain." I still think that the text is fine the way it is but if it will make you all happy, go ahead. NancyHeise (talk) 17:42, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

One more thing to mention - RelHistBuf wrote this on the FAC page regarding this paragraph "A sentence on the Revocation and the effects on the Huguenots should be added at the end of the paragraph". I have added mention of the Revocation and the effects on the Catholic Church in the section on the French Revolution but he thinks I am trying to hide some ugly things about Church history by doing so - I was trying to give the history of the Church, not of France under the control of secular rulers - but I dont want to be accused of being POV anymore so please feel free to chip in and lets get this done. Thanks. NancyHeise (talk) 17:50, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
Politically he accepted it (in other words, he didn't revoke Henry IV's absolution), yes, but never officially; your passage says that he "supported King Henry IV's 1598 Edict of Nantes", which is not true. I am sure you know that he was in no position to support the Edict of Nantes because a pope had no leeway at all to grant freedoms to "heretics". If the papacy had recognised the edict, why would it have needed to be revoked?
The word "dismay" is, in my opinion, appropriate. According to the French representative in Rome, Arnaud d'Ossat, Clement VIII said that the edict "was crucifying him". D'Ossat reported to Henry IV that Clement "was cut to the heart by the edict promulgated by the King to the advantage of heretics and to the prejudice of the faith ... this edict was the worst that could possibly be devised. It granted freedom of conscience to everyone, which was utterly disastrous. The edict would enable heretics to take over all public offices and invade the Parlements, where they would promote the cause of heresy and set their faces against anything which might promote the faith ... The warmth and energy you displayed in the heretics' cause and the cool indifference you showed towards the Catholic faith, which you gave your solemn oath to defend, made an extremely bad impression on the Pope, who was not sure whether he could now rely on you; the whole sad affair almost unhinged his mind ... this edict that you threw in his face dealt a grievous blow to his reputation and standing and he felt he had been slashed across the cheek." (Quoted by Roland Mousnier in The Assassination of Henry IV, Faber & Faber, 1973, pp. 151–52).
What is this if not dismay? (I should say that it was never my intention to edit the article. You can see above that I was drawn into suggesting alternative wordings, but I originally intended only to comment. It is up to you whether to make changes or not.) qp10qp (talk) 21:55, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] More quote clarifications

I read through again to look at the quotations to make sure they were properly attributed and I only found a few that were a bit confusing:

  • "Then he took the bread, said the blessing, broke it, and gave it to them, saying, 'This is my body, which will be given for you; do this in memory of me.'"[100] "Then he took a cup, gave thanks, and gave it to them, saying, 'Drink from it, all of you, for this is my blood of the covenant, which will be shed on behalf of many for the forgiveness of sins.' "[95][101]" -- It might be best to say in the article which books gave each quote, although I suspect that only one version needs to be in the article.
eliminated the Schreck ref at the end of one of the quotes so they are both only refd to the source which provided them. I disagree that we can only use one version because the actual words of consecration are taken from those two exact sources. Using only one version will be factually incorrect and a lot of Catholics will be upset with us. NancyHeise (talk) 09:06, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
Sorry, I don't think I made myself clear enough. I meant that it might be good to say which books of the Bible each quote came from. For example, it might be better to say "Similar words of institution are found in the three synoptic Gospels. The Gospel of Luke says "..." while Book X says "...". For people unfamiliar with the Bible, I think this would add a bit of clarity. Karanacs (talk) 18:31, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  • The Church teaches that the saints "do not cease to intercede with the Father for us ... so by their fraternal concern is our weakness greatly help - is the quote from a church document or Schreck?
Reworded for clarification NancyHeise (talk) 09:06, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
Very nice, thanks! Karanacs (talk) 18:31, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  • In 2008, the Church called the scandal "exceptionally serious" and estimated that it was "probably caused by 'no more than 1 per cent' of the 400,000" worldwide Catholic priests -I checked the newspaper source, and the only part that was a quote fromthe Church was the “no more than 1 per cent” section. This needs to be rewritten to make it clear that "Exceptionally serious" and the rest of the quote are the words of the journalist, not the church.

Karanacs (talk) 14:26, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

Reworded for clarification. good comments, thanks! NancyHeise (talk) 09:06, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
Thanks! Karanacs (talk)

[edit] Questions for newly added sentence on Borgias

I saw on the FAC page that this was added Because the simony and nepotism practiced in the Church of the 15th and early 16th centuries prevented any kind of papal reform, rich and powerful families like the Borgia's were able to control the papal office and seated their own worldly candidates like Alexander VI in (1492).. Does "papal reform" mean reform by the popes or reform of the papacy? Does the source actually state that simony and nepotism directly prevented papal reform? That implies that papal reform was actively underway during this entire period and the families deliberately squashed it. I also am unsure of whether "worldly" would be a POV-word here. There are also punctuation errors. Karanacs (talk) 21:57, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

Karanacs, I have made changes to the sentence since you wrote this and I think my changes already address part of your comment here. Simony and nepotism are not the words used to describe the corruption on these page numbers for Bokenkotter or Duffy but they describe the practices and Duffy, later uses those exact words when the Church finally does eliminate the practice. I dont think the source has to say those exact words for me to be able to use them here and simony and nepotism are wikilinked for the reader who does not know what they are. NancyHeise (talk) 08:48, 5 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Official name

The official name really is "Catholic Church" and not "Roman Catholic Church"? One would think the latter, though correct me if I'm wrong. Mazeau (talk) 03:33, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

The main exposition of doctrine is called the "Catechism of the Catholic Church". Gimmetrow 03:42, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
Yes - see debates on this at length above. Johnbod (talk) 12:02, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

Apart from anything else, there are many official documents where the Roman Church does use the term Roman Catholic Church of itself, eg ARCIC, several dioceses in England and Wales use the term on their websites and so on. (Quote of David Underdown) --Carlaude (talk) 14:30, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

Together this indicates that the RCC is apt to use the the "Catholic" name in documents to it those within and the "Roman Catholic" to those outside-- such as on ARCIC and websites. Which form do you think Wikipedia should take?--Carlaude (talk) 14:35, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

The article, after extensive discussion above, uses Roman Catholic Church as the article title, and the Catholic Church in the text, with a brief comment on the usages. This seems the best arrangement to me and many others, though many wanted "Catholic Church" used in all contexts. You should note that "Roman Catholic" is very largely an English-language usage, not often found in other languages. Johnbod (talk) 15:20, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] sentence

"Catholics believe that God is creator of nature and all that exists." From this sentence I deduce that Catholics believe that God created himself, since Catholics also believe that God exists. Randomblue (talk) 13:39, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

This is a typcial translation problem, deducing from a false translation of the Niceene Creed:
Credo in unum Deum, patrem omnipotentem, factorem caeli et terrae,visibilium omnium et invisibilium.
becomes We believe in one God, the Father, the Almighty, maker of heaven and earth, of all that is, seen and unseen
Catholic believe that God is the creator of all beings. --Saint-Louis (talk) 14:41, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
That doesn't solve the problem, does it? Randomblue (talk) 17:38, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
Replace "Catholics believe that God is creator of nature and all that exists." with "Catholic believe that God is the creator of all beings." --Saint-Louis (talk) 19:00, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
Excellent comment Randomblu, I added wording and a reference to make this clear. Thanks. NancyHeise (talk) 19:08, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Lawsuit totals

The child sex abuse paragraph should tabulate the estimated number of millions of dollars that the Church has been ordered to pay or has paid out to settle these lawsuits. It's an important point - I am not a valid statistical sample of anything but myself, but probably 75% of my Catholic friends have stopped giving any money to the Church because they think it's going to be paid out in settlements. It would also be a good place to discuss (in the briefest possible way) the way that the Church is legally organized in the US; the Catholic sex abuse cases article mentions several separate diocese and archdiocese bankruptcies. I think this would be a good place to mention it to answer immediately the question of why a single archdiocese can be bankrupt and why the lawsuits aren't directed at the Vatican itself, for example. Tempshill (talk) 20:26, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Two sex abuse sentences removed, for two reasons.

After reading the justification for them over at the FAC page, I just removed this from the sex abuse paragraph:

This percentage was far surpassed in a 2004 US government investigation of student sexual abuse by US public school teachers.[2] Although public school administrators engaged in exactly the same behavior when dealing with accused teachers,[3]

The claim over at the FAC page was that they were "required" by WP:NPOV. This is untrue. There is no point of view being pushed by the surrounding sentences. These defensive statements are, as I stated on the FAC page, crazy. A Wikipedia article about an accused murderer is not required by the NPOV rules to also mention that several hundred thousand other people have also been accused of murder (thus implying that murder isn't very far out of the ordinary). Anyway, I also troubled to look up that first statement because I found it implausible, and indeed the cited PDF file doesn't state that "this percentage was far surpassed". The only possibly-close-to-this data I saw in the report was a percentage of students who said they had been abused, not a percentage of teachers who had been accused of abuse. Tempshill (talk) 20:37, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

This is referenced material, and shouldn't be removed without consensus. It may be your opinion that this material is irrelevant, but that view may not be shared by others. I'm not sure why you wish this contextual material to be withheld from the reader. The material has been reverted pending proper discussion. Xandar (talk) 22:22, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
The Public school teacher abuse US government report and news surrounding it directly compared it to the priest sex abuse scandal making the same claims as the article. NancyHeise (talk) 00:13, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Needs changes to stay listed as a Good Article

Note well under Talk:Roman_Catholic_Church#Official_name, above I state:
Apart from anything else, there are many official documents where the Roman Church does use the term Roman Catholic Church of itself, eg ARCIC, several dioceses in England and Wales use the term on their websites and so on. Together this indicates that the RCC is apt to use the the "Catholic" name in documents to it those within and the "Roman Catholic" to those outside-- such as on ARCIC and websites. Which form do you think Wikipedia should take?--Carlaude (talk) 14:35, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
This page purposely, frequently, and without apology calls the Roman Catholic Church the Catholic Church, which is totally POV and tantamount to calling the Roman Catholic Church the one & only church. Please fix this.
1. I would ask that every new Roman Catholic idea presented begins "Catholics believe" or the "Church teaches.." or "The Catechism states..." (not almost every). For example,under "Jesus, sin, and Penance" that article states "Since Baptism can only be received once..." as a known fact.. which it is not. It is POV.
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2. I would ask that every paragraph (with a Roman Catholic ideas presented) begins "Roman Catholics believe" or the "Roman Catholics Church teaches.." in the first sentence.--Carlaude (talk) 19:07, 9 June 2008 (UTC)