User talk:Roddyp

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[edit] BMW X5article

What is it that you feel is wrong with the English used in this article? Rlevse 13:12, 1 December 2005 (UTC)

Mostly it's in the BMW X5#2004 Refresh section. It goes from present to past tense in the same sentence (The exterior touches kept it fresh and give the X5 a more aggressive look), has spelling mistakes (cut of power), spurious apostrophes (halo's), and bad units (20") and abbreviations (2nd). The text in this section also needs general wikifying. There's nothing major wrong, but just lots of little things that hit you one after the other... Roddyp 21:24, 1 December 2005 (UTC)

It still has those and the wiki tag was removed again. Maybe you should fix it yourself. Just a friendly suggestion.Rlevse 00:32, 4 December 2005 (UTC)