Talk:Robert Pastor
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This page needs a lot of work, more than I can do for it. I put the cleanup tag on it, but it may need a complete rewrite, since it's basically a stub as is. Also, the extremely POV quote should be at least couched within a "Criticism" section, with appropriate NPOV introduction, if not removed to another article or taken out entirely. The article should probably also conform to the standard for a biographical article, since it is about a person, and one who's still alive at that. — Goueznou, 12.107.67.3 19:59, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
I added some more biography about Pastor as well as toned down the POV on his "North American Community" theory. - KK 12:59, 25 April 2007
I added more information, some external links and added sections. I removed the cleanup tag, hopefully it is "clean enough", as I am not very experienced editing biographies. G'day. Raven Morris (talk) 10:03, 17 December 2007 (UTC)