Talk:Richard Krawiec

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[edit] lukewarm

Even though I think Time Sharing is an excellent book, I thought I should include in my sentence about the NYT review that it was "lukewarm." Maybe i should have said "harsh", but I want to keep npov, which seems worse than with lukewarm. Lukewarm could be taken as subjective too, but the bare statement of a book review in nyt without Lukewarm" sounds like an endorsement. Suggestions?Rich (talk) 00:03, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] article becoming resume-like

I respect Krawiec's writing, but it's beginning to sound like a resume. I don't want to remove valuable information, but the information about him needs to be phrased less glowingly.Rich (talk) 08:23, 13 May 2008 (UTC)