Talk:Restoree

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"It is the story of Sara, an obese and introverted librarian from New York"

I'd like to start by challenging this. Where is it said that she is actually obese? I realize that her latter form is more attractive, but my impression was that her primary concern was with her nose (was it her nose? I'm not sure), not her weight. [[User:Aranel|Aranel ("Sarah")]] 17:17, 29 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I reread it and indeed, you are correct. There are a number of things that hint that her body shape has changed and that the Mil would prefer more meat, but it is never stated. I have updated the description of Sara accordingly. The Steve 17:56, Nov 4, 2004 (UTC)