Talk:Renaissance Pleasure Faire of Southern California

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[edit] Passing the Torch

I am unable to improve the writing herein. I hope someone takes up the revision before the page is flagged for deletion. I meant to light the torch, not see it to the finish line. Im.marcus (talk) 06:09, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

I started some cleaning on it. Does anyone know why Burning Man is a link on this? James1906 (talk) 02:55, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

I couldn't find a good reference to link the Ren Faire culture from Southern California to Burning Man. It may be unimportanted but the events are influenced by each other as many people attend both. I understand that the same could be said about, for instance, the Orange Show but Burning Man has a stronger correlation when it comes to fashion trends, attitudes and the performing arts therein. (Im.marcus (talk) 06:17, 22 April 2008 (UTC))

[edit] Self Published Sources

There is a notice on this page stating that it might contain self published sources. I would like to note that this is the first artical I have written in any medium. Therefore as of today, it is an impossibility. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Im.marcus (talk • contribs) 06:32, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Too Much Spam!

This page has 88 links to advertising sites related to this faire. All of the footnotes are links, and they all seem to link to commercial sites. The actual information is sparse, and the article is mostly a huge list of acts and merchandisers. It needs a lot of improvement. Artemis-Arethusa (talk) 14:36, 10 May 2008 (UTC)

So let's improve the article before deleting it. — HelloAnnyong ^{(say whaaat?!)} 15:17, 10 May 2008 (UTC)

Ever reasonable. Thanks. Artemis-Arethusa (talk) 15:20, 10 May 2008 (UTC)

There's a first shot. Gotta look around to see if we can find a legit image to use here. — HelloAnnyong ^{(say whaaat?!)} 15:44, 10 May 2008 (UTC)