Talk:Real-Time Innovations

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[edit] Expansion

This page is a first draft. Anyone with more knowledge about RTI is encouraged to expand it. However, please be careful not to make it into an advertisement, nor to copy large amounts of text from the company's website. --Kevin S. 07:24, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

For example: What is the ATP from which RTI was awarded contracts? If it has a Wikipedia article, someone should make a link. --Kevin S. 17:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

Which Varian is it talking about? The link currently goes to a disambiguation page, which is, well, ambiguous. Also, the prose could use some work. This article reads like a list right now: "RTI is this. RTI has that. RTI middleware, etc., etc." Not very readable, see Manual of Style. --Kevin S. 21:19, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Deletion

This page has already been deleted once. If there is something wrong with it, please do not delete it again - fix it! --Kevin S. 07:19, 7 September 2007 (UTC)