Talk:Raymond S. McLain

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[edit] Requested corrections

Moving the following entries from the article to this talk page. -- JHunterJ 13:30, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

His son, Robert D. McLain, would like the following information corrected in this Wikipedia entry: Your web site has some errors about my father, the late Lieutenant General Raymond Stallings McLain:

1. He was born April 4, 1890; not in October.
2. He died in Walter Reed General Hospital, Washington, D. C.; not in Oklahoma City.
3. He led the 90th Infantry Division across France; not Europe.
4. The "C" in comptroller of the Army should be a capital letter; the word is part of the official title of that office.
5. He was a member of the National Security Training Commission; not the National Security Commission(there was no such commission). —The preceding comment was added to the article space by 160.149.102.108 (talk • contribs) 19 October 2006 (UTC).
6. He was also a member of the National Police Department —The preceding comment was added to the article space by 207.2.100.97 (talk • contribs) 15:07, 1 December 2006 (UTC).