Talk:Ray Krone

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[edit] Neutrality and trial expansion

I added the neutrality tag because I feel that the article, in particular after the introduction, puts too much emphasis on Krone's innocence and the ignoble actions of the Phoenix police and prosecution. While I am personally sure that the police and prosecution were in fact behaving in less-than-fair-minded ways, it's not in Wikipedia's place to fall just short of saying that outright. As for the expansion, I am referring to the fact that the description of the trials, which I'm temporarily assuming were called something like Arizona v Krone, is very very brief, giving little but details about obscured evidence and the like. So the truth is that both of these could be solved in one go — all the article needs is a more thorough description of the trial, and that should be good enough. $\sim$ Lenoxus " * " 01:16, 15 November 2007 (UTC)