Talk:Ray Dionaldo
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[edit] regarding some inaccuracies
I have a few questions and concerns I just wanted to put out there:
Ray Dionaldo is a Tuhon only in the context of Sayoc Kali. Otherwise, he is Guro Ray Dionaldo.
Baltazar Sayoc and Chris Sayoc are Tuhons, not "masters." I understand that one is essentialy tantamount to the other, but these kinds of details can potentially be offensive and contentious.
"For those seeking an ancient art for modern times, Filipino Combat Systems is a method of self defense a personal growth whose time has come."--this reads too much like a brochure, as do many other lines in the article.
Nothing is cited, yet there are many opinions expressed throughout.
I am a professional editor with almost six years of experience in educational publishing, as well as a Sayoc Fighting System student. I would like to work with you on this article--Tuhon Ray is a top-notch person and a top-notch instructor who deserves a top-notch Wikipedia entry.
--Robin Searles 16:03, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
On the FCS homepage, it states that he has achieved the rank of Lakan Isa in Pekiti-Tirsia Kali. This is not an instructor's rank, but a mid-level beginner student's rank. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 219.95.19.146 (talk) 17:17, 8 April 2008 (UTC)