Talk:Ratnadeep Adivrekar

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• Very new to wiki here, so I hesitate to make any changes - but this entry is ripe with grammatical and syntaxic errors.

He has had several important solo exhibition Like "Memoirs of the Unreal city", "Refraction of Ideas....

exhibition should be plurlized. Like should not be capitalized.

When a photograph is painted on canvas, the sense of realness in the images are complicated, while they may retain a high degree of verisimilitude, it looses its mechanical tie to a specific situation

looses is not a word. However, loses is.

Time gets transfixed, still, and opaque like a dense solid mass.. .

Incomplete sentence. Time would seem to be the subject, but the predicate is missing.

• All in all, this article is poorly structured and doesn't adhere to the basic rules of English. It's almost as if it were translated. (Was it?)

• I'm not versed in wiki guidelines, but my hunch is this entry also ignores those standards (based on its total lack of sources) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Usernamism (talk • contribs) 19:06, 2 October 2007 (UTC)